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Some people think that being a doctor is hard.

Some people think that being a doctor is hard. 2r0Jk

Some people think that being a doctor is hard. I strongly agree with this statement and I will try to state my position. To start with, this profession requires hard work, strong will and is full of responsibilities. Doctors face the hardest decisions every day. Nowadays, COVID-19 changed everything. It caused millions of deaths in the wold wide. Doctors put their lives under a risk by working with ill patients. We should not forget that it is their job and they have to help others no matter what. Also, performing operation on a patient is the hardest part. One mistacke can be deadly for a person. This is why they have to plan everything and do their work carefully. In conclusion, we all must note that this profession is hard and full of risks.

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