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Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. Others belive that they should only be allow to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology. Discuss both view and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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A number of people claim that all university pupils should study whatever they wish. Whereas in contrast, others believe that they should only be allowed study subjects that students will make use of it in their future. Science and technology for example. This essay will discuss both view with appropriate examples in detail. One the one hand, experts suggest that all the students have to study in which they are interested. This claim is somehow advanteous. For instance if one can learn subjects of their own interested then individual may be save time rather than wasting time in learning in which they don't like that. In addition they can use these saved time in learning something new skills or doing activities related to their hobbies. Consequently, it reduce burden and they might gave good performance during theri academic as well as in their curicular activities such as sports, social events, hospilatility, management skills etc. On the other hand, if pupils study only major subjects which are going to helpful in their career in future then they might can't able to gain extra skills which i mention earlier in previous paragraph. For instance, one can mug-up entire reference and ened with good grades but they don't have any social skills, so, I think this kind of education system don't worthy which have only educational skills. They may not able to think out of the box sometimes whenever situations become worst in their life. So that, it is necessary to study the subjects in which pupils wish to study without any restrications. In conclusion, it may be more beneficial for students to study whatever they like and also learn their major subjects. From my point of view students have to adapt knowledge from their prime subjects as well as from their interested fields also.
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of it in their future. Science and technology
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students
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. This claim is somehow
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advanteous
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if one can learn
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subjects
of their
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interested then individual may be
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save
time
rather
than wasting time in learning in which they don't like that. In
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addition they
can
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these saved time in learning something new
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skills
or doing activities related to their hobbies.
Consequently
, it
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reduce
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burden and
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activities such as sports, social
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hospilatility
, management
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skills
etc.

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, if pupils
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study
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only
major
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subjects
which are going to
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helpful
in their career in future then they
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might can
't able to gain extra
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skills
which
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mention earlier in previous paragraph.
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ened
with
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grades
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skills
,
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this kind of education system don't worthy which have
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educational
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skills
. They may not able to
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think
out of the box
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whenever situations become worst in their life.
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that, it is necessary to
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the
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subjects
in which pupils wish to
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study
without any
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restrications
.

In conclusion
, it may be more beneficial for
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students
to
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study
whatever they like and
also
learn their major
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subjects
. From my point of view
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students
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have to
adapt knowledge from their prime
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subjects
as well
as from their interested fields
also
.
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IELTS essay Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. Others belive that they should only be allow to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology.

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