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Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. v.39

In contemporary era, university pupils should study subjects of their own choices or should they be obliged to study career oriented technology and science major subjects is a widely debated issue. A number of people reckon that students will retain their freedom to study subjects which they are fascinated; whilst others accord that they ought to involved in major that will be extremely helped in the future. This essay delves both the views and expresses my opinion. To embark upon, a university is the highest citadel for education in a country and it is crucial the next adept generation who would lead the country. For example, the experts tend to say “the student at university level shall be given certain freedom while picking majors they study in and there shall not be any predefined syllabus”. Furthermore, they opine that forcing them to study a plethora of the latest subjects for the future employment would prepare them become workers for offices, not leaders for the country, however, they also express that letting them study a wide range of subjects would make them far more knowledgeable. Thus, not solely blindly run for their career. On the flip side, the university authority must consider the consequences of letting pupils choose their subjects. For example, a recent study shows that predefined syllabus-bound a pupil study regularly and prepares for the exam while freedom to take any subject dramatically increases the number of dropout pupil. Meanwhile, this is an alarming issue and this is why the university authority needs to think twice prior to implementing the policy. To conclude, certain freedom while picking subjects in university level is extremely helpful for the overall development and knowledge enhancement of pupil. Hence, an absolute freedom would make the outcome worse.
In contemporary era,
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university
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pupils
should
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study
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subjects
of their
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own
choices or should they
be obliged
to
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study
career oriented technology and science major
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subjects
is a
widely
debated issue. A number of
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
reckon that students will retain their
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freedom
to
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study
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subjects
which they
are fascinated
; whilst others accord that they ought to involved in major that will be
extremely
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
helped
in the future. This essay delves both the views and expresses my opinion.

To embark upon, a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
university
is the highest citadel for education in a country and it is crucial the
next
adept generation who would lead the country.
For example
, the experts tend to say “the student at
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
university
level shall be
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
given
certain
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
freedom
while picking majors they
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
study
in and there shall not be any predefined syllabus”.
Furthermore
, they opine that forcing them to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
study
a plethora of the latest
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
subjects
for the future employment would prepare them become workers for offices, not leaders for the country,
however
, they
also
express that letting them
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
study
a wide range of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
subjects
would
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
them far more knowledgeable.
Thus
, not
solely
blindly
run for their career.

On the flip side, the
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university
authority
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
must
consider the consequences of letting
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
pupils
choose their
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
subjects
.
For example
, a recent
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
study
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
shows
that predefined syllabus-bound a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
pupil
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study
regularly
and prepares for the exam while
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
freedom
to take any
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subject
dramatically
increases the number of dropout
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
pupil
. Meanwhile, this is an alarming issue and this is why the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
university
authority needs to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
think
twice prior to implementing the policy.

To conclude
, certain
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freedom
while picking
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
subjects
in
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university
level is
extremely
helpful for the
overall
development and knowledge enhancement of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
pupil
.
Hence
, an absolute
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
freedom
would
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
the outcome worse.
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IELTS essay Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology. Give reasons for your answer and include example

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4 paragraphs
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6.5
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