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Some people think that advertisements are useful and informative but according to others they provide false information and increase the prices of products.Discuss both and give your opinion.

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In today's sophisticated epoch, whether sitting in front of television or using mobile phone, people are bombarded with many advertisements. Few individuals ascertain that these are a great use to us as they provide us the information about available products in the market, whereas, according to others these advertisements just misguide us and lead to the increased prices of goods. This essay sheds light upon both notions and gives my own view. On the one side, these adds cater our information needs about the useful products that exist in the market. Take for instance some face care products which really help us with skin issues. We get to know about these products merely by their publicity. Moreover, these advertisements inform us about the choices we have. For example, if we are planning to buy an air conditioner for our home, we are already aware about the range of prices with companies which are providing them. Therefore, advertisements prove to be useful to us in many ways. On the flip side, companies use the sentiments of the consumers, merely to increase their sales. Some products which claim to cure joint aches are good examples of this. Sellers make false promises only for the sake of their own benefits. Besides this, publicity of products and services results in increased prices as companies pay large amounts of money to the celebrities they hire to advertise their products. Hence, advertisements not only provide wrong information but also aid to the raised prices. After gauging both views, it can be concluded that, undoubtedly, advertisements guide us about the important products exist in the market, however, they sometimes use people's emotions to add raise in sales. Therefore, they should work towards improving the quality of their services and goods and should not play with human beings feelings.
In
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today
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people
are bombarded
with
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many
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advertisements
. Few individuals ascertain that these are a great
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use
to us as they provide us the information about available
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products
in the market, whereas, according to others these
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advertisements
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just
misguide us and lead to the increased prices of
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goods
. This essay sheds light upon both notions and gives my
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own
view.

On the one side, these
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adds
cater our information needs about the useful
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products
that exist in the market. Take
for instance
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some
face care
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products
which
really
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help
us with skin issues. We
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get
to know about these
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
products
merely
by their publicity.
Moreover
, these
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advertisements
inform us about the choices we have.
For example
, if we are planning to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
buy
an air conditioner for our home, we are already aware about the range of prices with
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
companies
which are providing them.
Therefore
,
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advertisements
prove to be useful to us in
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many
ways.

On the flip side,
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companies
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use
the sentiments of the consumers,
merely
to increase their sales.

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Some
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products
which claim to cure joint aches are
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good
examples of this. Sellers
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make
false promises
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only
for the sake of their
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own
benefits.
Besides
this, publicity of
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products
and services results in increased prices as
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
companies
pay large amounts of money to the celebrities they hire to advertise their
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
products
.
Hence
,
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advertisements
not
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only
provide
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wrong
information
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but
also
aid to the raised prices.

After gauging both views, it can
be concluded
that,
undoubtedly
,
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advertisements
guide us about the
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important
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products
exist in the market,
however
, they
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sometimes
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use
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people
's emotions to
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add
raise in sales.
Therefore
, they should work towards improving the quality of their services and
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goods
and should not play with human beings feelings.
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IELTS essay Some people think that advertisements are useful and informative but according to others they provide false information and increase the prices of products.

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  American English
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301 words
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