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Milk tea has become a popular beverage in recent years. Many believe that this drink is terribly unhealthy. Others, however, believe there are great benefits to be gained when drinking milk tea. Discuss both sides and state your opinion.

Milk tea has become a popular beverage in recent years. Many believe that this drink is terribly unhealthy. Others, however, believe there are great benefits to be gained when drinking milk tea. p1Y52

People hold different opinions about the benefits of milk tea. Although many people believe that there are considerable advantages to be obtained when consuming milk tea, there are still many disadvantages to our health. Firstly, milk tea is trendy. It’s undeniable that milk tea is very delicious, and the ingredients are incredibly yummy. For instance, the bobas are very chewy and sweet, which are preferred by many people. The milk is creamy and tasty, which boosts the flavor of the milk tea. This helps the milk tea to be known better and to be more desired in countries. Secondly, milk tea is a precious business sector. People believe that it’s conducive to countries’ economies. For example, opening more and more milk tea shops and businesses will generate many jobs. Furthermore, it also stimulates investment from foreign investors. This can boost a country’s economy. On the other hand, milk tea can be very harmful to one’s health. There are many diseases and health problems related to milk tea. Milk tea contains many fats and calories, which can cause obesity if overly consumed. Also, drinking milk tea will increase the risk of chronic diseases such as heart diseases and cancer. This is very dangerous for buyers and consumers. In the second place, milk tea can be very addictive. Some consumers believe that they can’t stop drinking milk tea. For instance, one of milk tea’s most essential ingredients is tea. Tea is full of caffeine which can be very addictive. This could be very unhealthy for a person’s health. Overall, it’s believed that milk tea is very beneficial; however, in my opinion, milk tea is very harmful to our body. Sugar should be reduced to have healthier milk tea.

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