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Some people think success in life comes from hard work and determination. Others think money and appearance are more important. Discuss two sides, give opinion

Some people think success in life comes from hard work and determination. Others think money and appearance are more important. Discuss two sides, give opinion jQ5Kd

First and foremost, people should recognize that the secret of success is always trying your best. Determination gives us the motivation to set up goals which become the foundation of success. Einstein once said: “It’s not that I am so smart, it’s that I stay with problems longer. ” Hang in there and never stop striving to be all you can be! . To illustrate my point, the legendary basketball player Michael Jordan was eliminated from the basketball team in high school, but he worked hard practiced and became one of the greatest sports athletes of all time. The example above demonstrates that no successful people find instant success and recognition. It is the result of perseverance and hard work

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