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Some people think students should wear uniform at school, while others think uniforms does not play a role in their study. So they should be free to wear whatever they want.

Some people think students should wear uniform at school, while others think uniforms does not play a role in their study. So they should be free to wear whatever they want. 6LA7K
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, there will be no problems, and it will be easier for parents
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IELTS essay Some people think students should wear uniform at school, while others think uniforms does not play a role in their study. So they should be free to wear whatever they want.

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
243 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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