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You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Some people think students should study the science of food and how to prepare it. Others think that school time should be used in learning important subjects. Discuss both views and give your opinion? Give reasons for your answer, and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words.

Some people think students should study the science of food and how to prepare it. Others think that school time should be used in learning important subjects. Nj2b
People have different views about whether students need to learn food science and preparation or other major courses. In my opinion, there are other disciplines more useful in students' future. On the one hand, the course of food science enables students to understand the scientific knowledge behind eatable ingredients; therefore, they would be able to recognise and select the most nutrient products in terms of the appearance, smell and touch of the goods for themselves or their family. Besides, learning the preparation of healthy diets would help people at an early age with maintaining and boosting their general health. For example, in Japan, middle school students have to demonstrate how they prepare their meals in a day, and then teachers will help these students to identify which food may not as good as they thought, such as deep-fried chips. On the other hand, there are other courses significant to the future of young people. Firstly, acquiring the skills of using different languages, such as English and Japanese, is useful for students in achieving career success. For instance, Chinese people who are equipped with the ability to speak English are able to set up their businesses in America and earn the American currency. Secondly, Mathematics is also an important subject that improves students' logical reasoning. The process of solving Maths' questions requires students to think step by step. This would gradually develop young people's reasoning. In summary, while students' physical health benefits from learning the knowledge of food science and preparation, it seems to me that poeple's future will flourish due to the help of languages and Maths acquirement.
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science and preparation or
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major courses. In my opinion, there are
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disciplines more useful in students' future.

On the one hand, the course of
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food
science enables
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students
to understand the scientific knowledge behind eatable ingredients;
therefore
, they would be able to
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recognise
and select the most nutrient products in terms of the appearance, smell and touch of the
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goods
for themselves or their family.
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, learning the preparation of healthy diets would
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help
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people
at an early age with maintaining and boosting their general health.
For example
, in Japan, middle school
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students
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have to
demonstrate how they prepare their meals in a day, and then teachers will
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help
these
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students
to identify which
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may not as
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good
as they
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, such as deep-fried chips.

On the
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hand, there are
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courses significant to the future of young
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people
.
Firstly
, acquiring the
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skills
of using
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different
languages, such as English and Japanese, is useful for
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students
in achieving career success.
For instance
, Chinese
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people
who
are equipped
with the ability to speak English are able to set up their businesses in America and earn the American currency.
Secondly
, Mathematics is
also
an
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important
subject that
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improves
students' logical reasoning. The process of solving
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Maths
' questions requires
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students
to
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think
step by step. This would
gradually
develop young
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people
's reasoning.

In summary, while students' physical health benefits from learning the knowledge of
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food
science and preparation, it seems to me that
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poeple
's future will flourish due to the
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help
of languages and
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Maths
acquirement.
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IELTS essay Some people think students should study the science of food and how to prepare it. Others think that school time should be used in learning important subjects.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
268 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
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