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Some people think planning future is a mere wastage of time we should live in present .for you agree or disagree

Some people think planning future is a mere wastage of time we should live in present. for you agree or disagree 3bPgn
In present scenario, masses are extremely concerned about their future so they usually devote a lot of time in planning the incoming activities. Some people consider it a mere futile work. I vehemently discord with them. This treatise unravels the points that will bolster my viewpoint. The chief rationalization for my viewpoint comes from various heterogeneous points. The most conspicuous one is if we have insight into the life of successful people then the most highlight feature is their planning of time ahead. For instance, many renowned people like mukesh ambani, APJ Abdul kalam speaks volume about the organising future. Another striking feature is there are many distractions in contemporary era commeners and students generally get swayed by them if they do not plan everything. Another worthwhile factor is time is a precious resource at our disposal. In order to utilise it productively in day-to-day life, planning is of utmost importance. Furthermore, if we do not lead an organized life we might lose many milestones. In essence, I want to articulate that one should always plan their future events because if we want to take a leaf from the book of successful people it would be planning and time management.
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extremely
concerned about their future
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so
they
usually
devote
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a lot of
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time
in
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planning
the incoming activities.
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Some
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people
consider it a mere futile work. I
vehemently
discord with them. This treatise unravels the points that will bolster my viewpoint.

The chief rationalization for my viewpoint
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comes
from various heterogeneous points. The most conspicuous one is if we have insight into the life of successful
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people
then the most highlight feature is their
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planning
of
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time
ahead.
For instance
,
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many
renowned
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people
like
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mukesh
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ambani
, APJ Abdul
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kalam
speaks volume about the
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organising
future. Another striking feature is there are
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many
distractions in contemporary era
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commeners
and students
generally
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get
swayed by them if they do not plan everything. Another worthwhile factor is
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time
is a precious resource at our disposal. In order to
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utilise
it
productively
in day-to-day life,
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planning
is of utmost importance.
Furthermore
, if we do not lead an
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organized
life we might lose
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many
milestones. In essence, I want to articulate that one should always plan their future
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events
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because
if we want to take a leaf from the book of successful
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people
it would be
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planning
and
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
time
management.

IELTS essay Some people think planning future is a mere wastage of time we should live in present. for you agree or disagree

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200 words
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