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some people think no need to travel because we can see the world on the internet. Others think that travel is most important. Give opinion and experience, examples.

some people think no need to travel because we can see the world on the internet. Others think that travel is most important. Give opinion and experience, examples. q0pYP
It is irrefutable fact that, masses shows highly curiousity among grasping knowledge about different regions. Although, various individuals meditate that the travelling is the best way of obtain knowledge about others nations. However, others consider that the in this contemporary epoch we get information through browsing and watching television. I agree with formal statement that people get different experience. I shall justified in the ensuring paragraphs. To dive into the topic, to commence with, travelling play an immense role to open various doors of knowledge, they gain knowledge not only geographical but also about culture and various customs. For instance a study has shown their outcomes which demonstrates that the when mortal travelled personally to other places, they have lots of information regarding their heritage. In other words, they can learn about host history and know about legend and archeological monuments. Besides, thy follow rules and regulations among tourist place. Moreover, it is golden time because they meet and counsel from different characters. Indeed, we have opportunities to give valuable time to our near and dear ones and maintain our relationship status. Flipping to the other side, on the other hand, some people argued that why we should pay extra money and waste our quality time. The advancement of Technology provides us sort of our trouble we easily see whole world sitting in any place of world. To eloborates, individuals have wish to visit difficult access continebt such as Antartica but it would be difficult to visit due to harsh weather conditions. Thus, they can optain all kinds of knowledge in just click of button. Furthermore, television contain different channels such as Discovery and global television network, which exhibit 24 into 7 within reasonable cost. Taking everything into an account my foregone conclusion is that, there are various benefits of gaining knowledge from numerous countries while watching on television and visiting. In my opinion, best way to enhance information about others territory is travelling.
It is irrefutable fact that, masses
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shows
highly
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curiousity
among grasping
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knowledge
about
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different
regions.
“Although” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
Although
,
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various
individuals meditate that the travelling is the best way of obtain
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knowledge
about others nations.
However
, others consider that the in this contemporary epoch we
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
information through browsing and watching
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television
. I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
agree
with formal statement that
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people
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get
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different
experience. I shall
The verb 'shall' requires the base form of the verb: "justify"
justified
in the ensuring paragraphs.

To dive into the topic, to commence with, travelling play an immense role to open
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various
doors of
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knowledge
, they gain
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knowledge
not
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only
geographical
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but
also
about culture and
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various
customs.
For instance
a study has shown their outcomes which demonstrates that the when mortal travelled
personally
to
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other
places, they have lots of information regarding their heritage. In
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
other
words, they can learn about host history and know about legend and archeological monuments.
Besides
, thy follow
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rules
and regulations among tourist place.
Moreover
, it is golden time
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because
they
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meet
and counsel from
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different
characters.
Indeed
, we have opportunities to give valuable time to our near and dear ones and maintain our relationship status.

Flipping to the
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other
side, on the
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other
hand,
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some
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people
argued that why we should pay extra money and waste our quality time. The advancement of Technology provides us sort of our trouble we
easily
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see
whole world sitting in any place of world. To
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eloborates
, individuals have wish to visit difficult access
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continebt
such as
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Antartica
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but
it would be difficult to visit due to harsh weather conditions.
Thus
, they can
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optain
all kinds of
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knowledge
in
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just
click of button.
Furthermore
,
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television
contain
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
different
channels such as Discovery and global
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
television
network, which exhibit 24 into 7 within reasonable cost.

Taking everything into an account my foregone conclusion is that, there are
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
various
benefits of gaining
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
knowledge
from numerous countries while watching on
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
television
and visiting. In my opinion
A determiner is probably missing here: ", the best".
, best
way to enhance information about others territory is travelling.
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IELTS essay some people think no need to travel because we can see the world on the internet. Others think that travel is most important. Give opinion and experience, examples.

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