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Some people think news has no connections to people's lives, so it is a waste of time to read news in newspapers and watch it on television.

Some people think news has no connections to people's lives, so it is a waste of time to read news in newspapers and watch it on television. Wr5D
Mostly people think that news has nothing to do with them at all. They think it takes a lot of time to read the news or watch it on TV. I disagree with this opinion. Firstly, that news gives people about what it happening in the world and the latest technology. For instance, on the one hand if there is no news in our lives, if the internet and TV are not shared, people will not know what is going on the world. The news is mainly about the events that take place in people's lives, about good and bad news, about the industry of the country or its achievements. So I'm totally against the idea that 'People don't need news, they take people's time'. I think life without innovation has a very strong impact on people.
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has nothing to do with them at all. They
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it on TV. I disagree with this opinion.
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, that
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gives
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about what
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it
happening in the world and the latest technology.
For instance
, on the one hand if there is no
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news
in our
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lives
, if the internet and TV are not shared,
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people
will not know what is going on the world. The
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news
is
mainly
about the
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events
that take place in
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people
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lives
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, about the industry of the country or its achievements.
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totally
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don't need
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, they take
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people
's time'. I
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life without innovation has a
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strong impact on
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IELTS essay Some people think news has no connections to people's lives, so it is a waste of time to read news in newspapers and watch it on television.

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
137 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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4.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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