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Some people think news has no connection to people's lives so then it is a waste of time to read news paper and watch television news programs To what extent do you agree or disagree? v.2

Some people think news has no connection to people's lives so then it is a waste of time to read news paper and watch television news programs v. 2
In recent days, the magazine is becoming a major medium to get a news convenient. However, few people believe that there is a no connection between life of people and journal. That is why, people waste their time reading it and watch on television. I completely disagree with this statement. To begin with, people gain a knowledge about the incidence by a tabloid, which happened at worldwide and they aware of the some dangerous things. For example, one terrorists gone from the jail so, if any, people see him so, easily he catches by police because terrorists are dangerous for our nation and give harmful impact on the people. Furthermore, Students who have graduated from their University. So that, they easily find a job from the periodical. And apply to the given time period. In addition, the people get aware from the current situation and get information about what to do. For instance, in the recent days government of India announced a lockdown till 3 may because of the corona virus. Then, people get the news about when the lockdown open and the time period for that is increasing. Moreover, the share market is very important things for numerous people and they get some idea about which company they spend money. To conclude, news is directly connected with The person's life and it enhances the knowledge of the people. Also it is useful to get immediate news about the current affairs
In recent days, the magazine is becoming a major medium to
get
a
news
convenient.
However
, few
people
believe that there is a no
connection between
life of
people
and journal.
That is
why,
people
waste their time reading it and
watch
on television. I completely disagree with this statement.

To
begin
with,
people
gain a knowledge about the incidence by a tabloid, which happened at
worldwide and
they aware of the
some
dangerous
things.
For example
,
one terrorists
gone from the jail
so
, if any,
people
see
him
so
,
easily
he catches by police
because
terrorists are
dangerous
for our nation and give harmful impact on the
people
.
Furthermore
, Students who have graduated from their University.
So
that, they
easily
find a job from the periodical. And apply to the
given
time period.

In addition
, the
people
get
aware from the
current
situation and
get
information about what to do.
For instance
, in the recent
days
government
of India announced a lockdown till 3 may
because
of the
corona virus
. Then,
people
get
the
news
about when the lockdown open and the time period for
that is
increasing.

Moreover
, the share market is
very
important
things for numerous
people and
they
get
some
idea
about which
company
they spend money.

To conclude
,
news
is
directly
connected with

The person's life and it enhances the knowledge of the
people
.
Also
it is useful to
get
immediate
news
about the
current
affairs
9Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
14Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
8Mistakes

IELTS essay Some people think news has no connection to people's lives so then it is a waste of time to read news paper and watch television news programs v. 2

Essay
  American English
6 paragraphs
240 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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