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Some people think news has no connection to people's lives, so it was a waste of time to read news in newspapersand watch it on television.

Some people think news has no connection to people's lives, so it was a waste of time to read news in newspapersand watch it on television. YV2B

Some part of society considering that watching and reading news is the time consuming because of news have not connected with individuals life. I would not agree to great extent with this point as the first reason for giving news is awarning society about people's living standards. Initially, i would say we have to know about importance of News. News devided into two parts: fake news and real news. As its name suggested fake news were created for distract individuals' mind from problem or from goodness to wrong situation and i can say it is absolutely waste of time. But as i suggested before there is an other type of news which is worth considering about its time consuming or not.

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