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Some people think news has no connection to people's lives so it is a waste of time to read news in newspapers and watch it on television

Some people think news has no connection to people's lives so it is a waste of time to read news in newspapers and watch it on television b8E3
As is knows, certain individuals think that news has no relation to the lives of humans, as a result, it is a waste of time reading news in the newspaper and watching television news programs. Therefore it is utterly claimed that several human beings think news has no association with people's lives so it could be a waste of time to perused news within the newspaper and observe news programs on TV. This essay will discuss both sides of the provided argument. The major reason why I think that reading news in the newspaper and watching news programs are a waste of time is because individuals spend the amount of time and great number of money. In todays world, people have a schedule, so they have not enough time in order to read newspapers or to watch news programs
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IELTS essay Some people think news has no connection to people's lives so it is a waste of time to read news in newspapers and watch it on television

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
138 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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