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Some people think law changes our behaviour. Discuss.

Some people think law changes our behaviour. Discuss. wnjOE

It is believed by some people that law alter our way of behaving. I am totally agree on this, because law and order has a big influence on our thinking and behaving. Many aspects of the paragraph will be discuss below. To commence with, law and order is necessary for a country to run in a smooth way as without strict rules or regulation there is a big chance for country to destabilize. Moreover, many Western countries around the including United Stated, United Kingdom, Australia and etc. are the biggest example in front of world to for regulating their country effectively. Furthermore, With implementation of strict rules, regulation and policies everyone would be alert for do and do not does in the country which ultimately results as success of the country. On the other hand, there are some Asian countries like Pakistan, India and Bangladesh where public do not care about authorities and do whatever they want without any fear which results in Kidnapping, felony, breaking the traffic rules and increase in crime rates. In addition to, Policy on every uncertain activity in daily life creates a certain limit for everyone to keep their steps on the limit. Take for example, Wage rates are decided in almost every countries, and everyone have to follow it if not it results in heavy fines not like countries who does not follow this rule are not punished or free. In conclusion, we can say that law and order is very for society to run smoothly.

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some
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people
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law
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agree
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because
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law
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big
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discuss
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law
 and order is necessary for a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withrusticbucolichomeyagrarianprovincial
country
 to run Consider replacing "in a smooth way" with the adverb for "smooth"; e.g., "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
in a smooth way
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rules
 or regulation there is a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:hugeenormousgiganticvast
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country
 to destabilize. Moreover
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many
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countries
 around the including United Stated, United Kingdom, Australia Write the name of the item after 'and' or use only "etc".etc
and etc
. are the biggest example in front of world to for regulating their You use this word too often, consider replacing it withrusticbucolichomeyagrarianprovincial
country
effectively
. Furthermore
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rules
, regulation and policies everyone would be alert for do and do not After the auxiliary verb 'do', use the base form of a verb. Did you mean "do"?do
does
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country
 which ultimately
 results as success of the country.

On the other hand
, there are This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 Asian You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlandpeopleregioncommunitysocietystate
countries
 like Pakistan, India and Bangladesh where public do not care about authorities and do whatever they want without any fear which results in Kidnapping, felony, breaking the traffic You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstatutedecreeprecedentguidelineregulationruling
rules
 and increase in crime rates. In addition
 to, Policy on every uncertain activity in daily life creates a certain limit for everyone to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :retain
keep
 their steps on the limit. Take for example
, Wage rates are decided
 in almost every The noun should be probably in the singular form: "country"?country
countries
, and everyone The pronoun 'everyone' is usually used with a third-person or a past tense verb: "has", "had".hashad
have
 to follow it if not it results in heavy fines not like You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlandpeopleregioncommunitysocietystate
countries
 who Did you mean "do"? Alternatively, check whether the singular of 'countries' should be used.do
does
 not follow this You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstatutedecreeprecedentguidelineregulationruling
rule
 are not punished or free.

In conclusion
, we can say that You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcasestatuterequirementcodeconstitutioncharter
law
 and order is This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 for society to run smoothly
. 