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(Some people think it's better to have one-to-one classes, while some people think it's better to study in a group. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

(Some people think it's better to have one-to-one classes, while some people think it's better to study in a group. aWY9
It is true that education plays a vital role in human's life, thus every parent is concerned about their offsprings' future. Some people believe that having individual lesson with teacher is more effective rather than studying in a full classroom for students. In this essay I will be discussing both sides and giving reasons why I think studying in a group is better. Firstly, all students are different and each of them require individual approach in learning. For example, some learners might not be able to concentrate in a group, because of various factors, such as loud noise, peers distraction, etc. Those students can success when they are alone with teacher and show outstanding reslults. Also, number of students with special needs require one-to-one classes, as they need more time and help of the educator with learning. On the other hand, studying together with their peers are more beneficial. For instance, while exploring some topics or new theme collectively, students face opinions that might contradict their ideas and help think more deep and do research. On some lessons by working together they get creative and learn how to use it in a real life. To sum up, personally, I think both ways of teaching and studying is effective and depends on child and his abilities.
It is true that education plays a vital role in human's life,
thus
every parent
is concerned
about their
offsprings
' future.
Some
people
believe that having individual lesson with teacher is more effective
rather
than
studying
in a full classroom for
students
. In this essay I will be discussing both sides and giving reasons why I
think
studying
in a group is better.
Firstly
, all
students
are
different
and each of them require individual approach in learning.
For example
,
some
learners might not be able to concentrate in a group,
because
of various factors, such as loud noise, peers distraction, etc. Those
students
can success when they are alone with teacher and
show
outstanding
reslults
.
Also
, number of
students
with special needs require one-to-one classes, as they need more time and
help
of the educator with learning.
On the other hand
,
studying
together with their peers are more beneficial.
For instance
, while exploring
some
topics or new theme
collectively
,
students
face opinions that might contradict their
ideas
and
help
think
more deep and do research. On
some
lessons by working together they
get
creative and learn how to
use
it in a real life. To sum up,
personally
, I
think
both ways of teaching and
studying
is effective and depends on child and his abilities.
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IELTS essay (Some people think it's better to have one-to-one classes, while some people think it's better to study in a group.

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