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Some people think it is of little use to study history; others think learning history helps us prepare for our modern life. Discuss both the views and give your own opinion.

Some people think it is of little use to study history; others think learning history helps us prepare for our modern life. 9rrn3
In this day and age, learning the history remains a controversial debate with strong arguments against and for. Some people insit that studying history could be pointless while others have a school of thought that learning history can help humans have a preparation for the modern era. Both views will be elucidated in the following paragraphs. On the one hand, in common parlance, history is depicted as the record of past events, so a host of people claim that these events could be incompatible with the modern life. To illustrate, most students in some academic institutions opt to learn science, technology or language in lieu of history because it brings no relevant values to the present or future. Furthermore, it is widely documented that few past events can reflect different standpoints and facts. Therefore, there is no guarantee of the currency of information obtained. On the other hand, a deluge of proponents concur with studying history by virtue of its essence being applicable in the modern life as well as the near future. To begin with, it is widely believed that learning historical events might be a terrific way for human beings to comprehend experiences of the ancestor and have a great deal of respect to historical figures who deprive themselves of death so that humans have the peace and independence. Needless to say, acquiring profound understanding about history can also help us take it into practice, especially in the field of tourism. To most tour guides in recent days, comprehending thoroughly about past events of a single country could diffuse traditional values and a proud history of a single nation to foreign tourists. In sum, although in relatively recent times, history could be marginalized in some academic institutions by virtue of its little relevance and false source of information, I strongly hold a belief that learning history can be of the paramount importance because it reflects the tradition, pride as well as the gratitute towards ancestor, and, therefore, scholastic institutions should encourage students to comprehend past events and put their knowledge gained into practice.
In this day and age,
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remains a controversial debate with strong arguments against and for.
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that studying
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could be pointless while others have a school of
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learning
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history
can
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help
humans have a preparation for the modern era. Both views will
be elucidated
in the following paragraphs.

On the one hand, in common parlance,
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history
is depicted
as the record of
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past
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events
,
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so
a host of
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people
claim that these
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events
could be incompatible with the modern life. To illustrate, most students in
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some
academic institutions opt to learn science, technology or language in lieu of
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history
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because
it brings no relevant values to the present or future.
Furthermore
, it is
widely
documented that few
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past
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events
can reflect
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different
standpoints and facts.
Therefore
, there is no guarantee of the currency of information obtained.
On the other hand
, a deluge of proponents
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concur
with studying
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history
by virtue of its essence being applicable in the modern life
as well
as the near future. To
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begin
with, it is
widely
believed that
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learning
historical
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events
might be a terrific way for human beings to comprehend experiences of the ancestor and have a great deal of respect to historical figures who deprive themselves of death
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so
that humans have the peace and independence. Needless to say, acquiring profound understanding about
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history
can
also
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help
us take it into practice,
especially
in the field of tourism. To most tour guides in recent days, comprehending
thoroughly
about
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past
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events
of a single country could diffuse traditional values and a proud
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history
of a single nation to foreign tourists.

In sum, although in
relatively
recent times,
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history
could
be marginalized
in
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some
academic institutions by virtue of its
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little
relevance and false source of information, I
strongly
hold a belief that
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learning
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history
can be of the paramount importance
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because
it reflects the tradition, pride
as well
as the
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gratitute
towards ancestor, and,
therefore
, scholastic institutions should encourage students to comprehend
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past
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events
and put their knowledge gained into practice.
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IELTS essay Some people think it is of little use to study history; others think learning history helps us prepare for our modern life.

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