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Some people think it is better to choose friends who always have the same opinion as them. Other people believe it's good to have friends who sometimes disagree with them. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. v.5

Some people think it is better to choose friends who always have the same opinion as them. Other people believe it's good to have friends who sometimes disagree with them. v. 5
Though there are people who choose friends those are not having similar thoughts and opinions, others tend to choose friends who do not have conflict stance. It is always proportional to the benefit they get out of the friendship. Mostly, who generally prefer to stay in comfort zone they seek friend with the same morality, whereas people hungry of opportunity and growth choose to contradict. In my view, friends having identical judgment will be more beneficial and will survive longer. Friends are meant to guide & support you when you need them most. Same mentality friends can understand and feel your current situation; they will have empathy and can even guide you better. Moreover, your ally can comprehend your ambiguous situation with less being told, which will again encourage one to share more information and feel intimate. An underperform student, for example, can only feel the joy of being just passed of another; however, a topper of a class can not feel the same. In a study, it has found that 80% of individuals are attracted to& nbsp; indistinguishable & homogeneous friends, and they become best friends. On the other hand, Sporadically, Friends those who are having different mindsets facilitates more space for an intellectual approach for a scenario or an objective. When people challenge one another, individuals tend to perform better to proof their view and to obtain gratification; resulting in a better version of themselves. Arguing on a subject, for instance, when a company requires a decision, occasionally people come up with a better opinion while they are discussing the topic with their friends, who looks into a different perspective of the same issue. To conclude, in my opinion, people ought to choose friends who have the same view as them instead of contradicting one, as in day to day corporate life we frequently deal with people who have a drastically unconventional perspective than us. Also, human likes to spend a blissful life in their leisure time with a true friend, who not only twofold our satisfaction but also apprehend us significantly.
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those are not having similar thoughts and opinions, others tend to
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choose
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friends
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who
do not have conflict stance. It is always proportional to the benefit they
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get
out of the friendship.
Mostly
,
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who
generally
prefer to stay in comfort zone they seek
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friend
with the same morality, whereas
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people
hungry of opportunity and growth
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choose
to contradict. In my view,
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friends
having identical judgment will be more beneficial and will survive longer.

Friends
are meant
to guide
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; support you when you need them most. Same mentality
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friends
can understand and
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feel
your
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current
situation; they will have empathy and can even guide you
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better
.
Moreover
, your ally can comprehend your ambiguous situation with less being
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told
, which will again encourage one to share more information and
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feel
intimate.
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student,
for example
, can
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the joy of being
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passed of another;
however
, a topper of a
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class
can not
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the same. In a study, it has found that 80% of individuals
are attracted
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; indistinguishable
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; homogeneous
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, and they become best friends.

On the other hand
,
Sporadically
,
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Friends
those
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who
are having
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different
mindsets facilitates more space for an intellectual approach for a scenario or an objective. When
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people
challenge one another, individuals tend to perform
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better
to proof their view and to obtain gratification; resulting in a
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better
version of themselves. Arguing on a subject,
for instance
, when a
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company
requires a decision,
occasionally
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people
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come
up with a
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better
opinion while they are discussing the topic with their
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friends
,
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who
looks into a
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different
perspective of the same issue.

To conclude
, in my opinion,
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people
ought to
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choose
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friends
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who
have the same view as them
instead
of contradicting one, as in day to day corporate life we
frequently
deal with
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people
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who
have a
drastically
unconventional perspective than us.
Also
, human likes to spend a blissful life in their leisure time with a true
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friend
,
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who
not
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only
twofold our satisfaction
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but
also
apprehend us
significantly
.
12Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
36Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
5Mistakes
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IELTS essay Some people think it is better to choose friends who always have the same opinion as them. Other people believe it's good to have friends who sometimes disagree with them. v. 5

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
344 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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