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Some people think internet has advantages while others think it has disadvantages to some extent do you agree or disagree?

It's undoubtedly true internet has changed our life completely. It has put impact on all things. However, in this essay I will discuss a number of approaches and my opinion too. On the one hand, internet has become a vital part of people life. And it put a great affect especially on communication so no distance no longer problems. Besides, due to internet business men can do their office work at home or at anywhere. They can do international meetings online through video call. Even students can take video lessons through Skype, video call etc. In addition, internet has lots of benefits than disadvantage. In today's people can do shopping through internet as much as they want. And there are lots of social media sides which give a opportunity to make new friends and can share their good information on various apps. On the other hand, internet has some drawbacks such as people become too lethargic because they completely depended on internet even they don't do their simple work. Children also have become addictive of internet they don't give proper attention to their education because they play electronic games as well as interact with strangers without consider harmful consequences. From my perspective, i personally believe all things which have introduced yet till have some pros and cons thus, internet has some benefits and drawbacks. But I think hence of internet our life has become more easier as that in previous years we were face lots of trouble to communicate with our family and friends but now we can see them live even we can make free international calls in a minute. Thanks to technology which made our life too much easy. To conclude, without internet our life will be dull and boring. Despite of internet we get lots of success and achievement. So internet is really essential for countries and for people.
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undoubtedly
true internet has
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changed
our
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life
completely. It has put impact on all things.
However
, in this essay I will discuss a number of approaches and my opinion too.

On the one hand, internet has
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become
a vital part of
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people
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life
. And it put a great affect
especially
on communication
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so
no distance no longer problems.
Besides
, due to internet business
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men
can do their office work at home or at anywhere. They can do international meetings online through video call. Even students can take video lessons through Skype, video call etc.

In addition
, internet has
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lots
of benefits than disadvantage. In
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today
's
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people
can do shopping through internet as much as they want. And there are
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lots
of social media sides which give a opportunity to
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make
new friends and can share their
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good
information on various apps.

On the other hand
, internet has
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some
drawbacks such as
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people
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become
too lethargic
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because
they completely depended on internet even they don't do their simple work. Children
also
have
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become
addictive of internet they don't give proper attention to their education
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because
they play electronic games
as well
as interact with strangers without consider harmful consequences.

From my perspective, i
personally
believe all things which have introduced
yet
till have
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some
pros and cons
thus
, internet has
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some
benefits and drawbacks.
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But
I
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think
hence
of internet our
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life
has
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become
more easier as that in previous years we were face
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lots
of trouble to communicate with our family and friends
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but
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now
we can
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see
them
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live
even we can
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make
free international calls in a minute. Thanks to technology which made our
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life
too much easy.

To conclude
, without internet our
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life
will be dull and boring. Despite of internet we
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get
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lots
of success and achievement.
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So
internet is
really
essential for countries and for
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people
.
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IELTS essay Some people think internet has advantages while others think it has disadvantages to some extent

Essay
  American English
6 paragraphs
312 words
5.5
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