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Developed countries have created environmental problems in the world particularly in their contribution to global warming what can be done to reduce the dangers of global warming

Environmental pollution has enormously increased throughout the world. Developing countries have generated environmental issues specifically in their endowment to global warming. In order to get rid of global warming we should use renewable energy resources. Firstly, there is no doubt that developing countries have increased the risk of global warming to the extent levels. For instance a large number of industries which are running in the developing countries have polluted the atmosphere. While some human activities such as greenhouse effect plays a key role in this regard. Green house gases trap the solar radiations in the atmosphere which results as the increased temperature of the environment across the globe. Secondly, public transport such as cars, buses, motorcycles are also sweltering the environment. Take for example these vehicles release carbon dioxide and methane gases which are adding to the atmosphere. Due to this weather conditions are constantly changing. overall climate climate of the world is becoming more worsen due to the severe conditions such as hot and cold. However due to the severity of hot weather the ice caps are melting which might causes flooding because of the rise in the sea level. Moreover burning of fossil fuels such as coal, oil and natural gas are proved to be a final nail in the coffin in raising the global warmth. Conversely, I think certain crucial measures should be taken by both the government and the masses in order to reduce the global warming. Initially the regime should impose taxes on the industries which mostly cause global warming and warned them to use the alternative sources of fossil fuels. The second step in this regard is that developing countries must rely upon natural resources such as solar energy, tidal energy from seas and oceans as a substitute to those sources which cause pollution in the environment. By obeying and practicing all these measures we might overcome this cause of climate change. To recapitulate, developing countries should strive to exclude the dangers of global warming by using renewable resources, otherwise it would be difficult for us to live on this planet due to extreme weather conditions.
Environmental pollution has
enormously
increased throughout the world.
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Developing
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countries
have generated environmental issues
specifically
in their endowment to
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global
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warming
. In order to
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get
rid of
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global
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warming
we should
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use
renewable energy resources.
Firstly
, there is no doubt that
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developing
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countries
have increased the
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risk
of
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global
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warming
to the extent levels.
For instance
a large number of industries which are running in the
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developing
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countries
have polluted the atmosphere. While
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some
human activities such as greenhouse effect plays a key role in this regard. Green
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house
gases trap the solar radiations in the atmosphere which results as the increased temperature of the environment across the globe.
Secondly
, public transport such as cars, buses, motorcycles are
also
sweltering the environment. Take
for example
these vehicles release carbon dioxide and methane gases which are adding to the atmosphere.
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Due
to this weather conditions are
constantly
changing.
overall
climate climate of the world is becoming more worsen
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due
to the severe conditions such as hot and
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cold
.
However
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due
to the severity of hot weather the ice caps are melting which might
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causes
flooding
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because
of the rise in the sea level.
Moreover
burning of fossil fuels such as coal, oil and natural gas
are proved
to be a final nail in the coffin in raising the
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global
warmth.
Conversely
, I
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think
certain crucial measures should
be taken
by both the
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government
and the masses in order to
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reduce
the
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global
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warming
.
Initially
the regime should impose taxes on the industries which
mostly
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cause
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global
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warming
and warned them to
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use
the alternative sources of fossil fuels. The second step in this regard is that
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developing
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countries
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must
rely upon natural resources such as solar energy, tidal energy from seas and oceans as a substitute to those sources which
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cause
pollution in the environment. By obeying and practicing all these measures we might overcome this
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cause
of climate
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change
. To recapitulate,
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developing
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countries
should strive to exclude the
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dangers
of
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global
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warming
by using renewable resources,
otherwise
it would be difficult for us to
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live
on this planet
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due
to extreme weather conditions.
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IELTS essay Developed countries have created environmental problems in the world particularly in their contribution to global warming what can be done to reduce the dangers of global warming

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