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Some people think increasing business and culture contact between nation is positive development,others think it leads to the disappearance of the nation identify. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some people think increasing business and culture contact between nation is positive development, others think it leads to the disappearance of the nation identify. wm7ll

In the current scenario, the hurdle of environmental pollution is expanding at an alarming rate which being faced by the individuals. Some proponents ponder that by growing the rates of oil is better solution for mitigating the menace of traffic and pollution. I totally disagree with provided statment. likewise, plethora of measures could be taken to eliminate this muddle. Firstly, by increasing the value of petrol for controlling the traffic and pollution is not the strong solution as the masses who are habitual to utilise their private vehicles will not stop, eventually traffic and pollution will remain stable. In this situation strict rules and regulations should be compulsory for everyone and they should use public transportation instead of private vehicles. Ultimately, the traffic and contamination will be decreased and productive for atmosphere. Moving further, lanes should be construed properly because broken roads are not safe for driving and make speed breaker. As a result of, it will decline the chance of road mishaps. Apart from this, the speed limit should be fixed for the folks owing to when mortals get late for office than they drive extremely fast which became the cause of accident. To cite an example, the survey has been conducted i 2019 in Asia which proclaimed that the 90% road accident happened due to over speed. In conclusion, it is not solely duty of the government to eliminate this problem, it also needs the support of the citizen. So that the world could be happier and safer place to live.

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traffic
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traffic
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pollution
 will remain stable. In this situation strict This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :requirements
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use
 public transportation instead
 of private vehicles. Ultimately
, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtransportationshipmentservicetravelinfluxgridlock
traffic
 and contamination will be decreased
 and productive for atmosphere.

Moving further
, lanes should be construed
properly
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because
 broken roads are not safe for driving and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 speed breaker. As a result
 of, it will decline the chance of road mishaps. Apart from this, the speed limit should be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :rectified
fixed
 for the folks owing to when mortals This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 late for office than they drive extremely
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fast
 which became the cause of accident. To cite an example, the survey has been conducted
 i 2019 in Asia which proclaimed that the 90% road accident happened due to over speed.

In conclusion
, it is not solely
 duty of the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :national authoritypublic authority
government
 to eliminate this problem, it also
 needs the support of the citizen. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
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 that the world could be happier and safer place to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reside
live
. 