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Some people believe that traveling is a memorable experience whereas others say it is a waste of time and money. Discuss both views and give your opinion

Some people believe that traveling is a memorable experience whereas others say it is a waste of time and money. Discuss both views and give your opinion KYVj6

Traveling removes monotony and gives us pleasure. Few ponder that explorer the world is memorable but on the same hand other thought it is usable. This essay extents to analyze both preseptives and however examine relevant sentiment. To embark on, traveling assit to broadens one"s outlook and refresh up mind's as well. It can also fruitful to acquired first hand knowledge regarding any thing across the world. Indeed it aid to promote communication skills. As if a person obtained communicate ability amongst themselves it help to learn about any language easily. To cite with an example a survey was conducted in one of the renowned university of London that 89percent of individual who used to traveled or in other word explore world has maximum experience and to deals with an situation smartly. Other 11 percent population who thought that it was a waste of finance as well as time had poor concentration regarding work knowledge and has undeveloped skills. In addition to this, traveling consists of pieceful platforms for individuals to enhance the different cultures of different languages which developed one"s mind. More people learnt massive amounts of benefits while traveling they persue their desire level up and hence stand in front of this competitive Era. Moreover community to be taught by history of several countries as well rules and regulation by authorities of that particular place. Well, on the other hand masses who ponder that traveling is a wasteful matter are in doubt but it could be true for that who are narrow minded. However due of extra burden of work in this working age it has become hard for a person to get enough time to spend with their loved ones. Thus everyone has their rudimentary needs that is why people do not have large sum of money to visit worldwide. It is certainly true after taken as a whole that according to my sentiment traveling is necessary to reduce anxiety level. Of course people enjoy a wide source of experience in communicate with numerous other people. Taking everything into consideration it could be said that traveling is not a waste thing but as well people adapt in new environment.

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hard
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get
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loved
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reduce
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