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Some people think hotel accommodation is a good place to stay instead of going outside and explore the country while some think hotel is not a good option even so the luxuries and all the facilities in the hotel. let's look on both the views.

Some people think hotel accommodation is a good place to stay instead of going outside and explore the country while some think hotel is not a good option even so the luxuries and all the facilities in the hotel. let's look on both the views. gbamO
Nowadays people a round the world travel a lot. Therefore They should think about a place for staying at that time. Some people would rather stay at the hotel than going outside. The other one prefer to visit the tourist destinations and be in public. The first group prefers to stay at the hotel and relax there all the time and use their luxury facilities such as swimming at pool, sauna or going near the private beach and sunbathing there, Use Gym's hotel, They Can use tourist Guide which helps them to know about what place is more spectacular to visit or which street, Taxi, bas you should get. So Hotels can provide a best service while traveling. so it’s much bad idea. The other one prefers to rent a house, apartment or suite
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a round the world travel a lot.
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about a place for staying at that time.
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than going outside. The other one prefer to visit the tourist destinations and be in public.

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first
group prefers to stay at the
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hotel
and relax there all the time and
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their luxury facilities such as swimming at pool, sauna or going near the private beach and sunbathing there,
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Gym's
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hotel
, They Can
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use
tourist Guide which
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helps
them to know about what place is more spectacular to visit or which street, Taxi,
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get
.
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Hotels
can provide
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IELTS essay Some people think hotel accommodation is a good place to stay instead of going outside and explore the country while some think hotel is not a good option even so the luxuries and all the facilities in the hotel. let's look on both the views.

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133 words
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