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Some people think dangerous sports should be banned. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your opinion?

Some people think dangerous sports should be banned. Give reasons for your opinion? 2ldrj
Keeping in the view, it is thought by a section of society that those sports should be prohibited which put dangerous influence on humans. I, too concur with this statement since people loss their lives, while playing risky games, and I will discuss several reasons in aforementioned paragraphs. To embark on, there are a number of reasons why I claim that dangerous sports should be banned. Discussing the one of the most obvious reasons is that these sports are fatal. To be more precise, there are ample of games such as paradise, Sucba diving and river rafting.
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IELTS essay Some people think dangerous sports should be banned. Give reasons for your opinion?

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2 paragraphs
97 words
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