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Some people think certain prisoners be made to do unpaid community work instead of being put behind bars. What extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people think certain prisoners be made to do unpaid community work instead of being put behind bars. What extent 2qbX
It is often said that some prisoners should be considered as honorary in welfare of society. To a certain extent, I would agree that this kind of intiative will be help in our society's welfare. Moreover, This will also make them mentally and physically fit. On the on hand, where crime rate is increasing at an alarming speed and it is harming our community, and due to whom it is happening, they should be punished as unpaid work for society welfare.
It is
often
said that
some
prisoners should
be considered
as honorary in welfare of society. To a certain extent, I would
agree
that this kind of
intiative
will be
help
in our society's welfare.
Moreover
, This will
also
make
them mentally and
physically
fit. On the on hand, where crime rate is increasing at an alarming speed and it is harming our community, and due to whom it is happening, they should
be punished
as unpaid work for society welfare.
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IELTS essay Some people think certain prisoners be made to do unpaid community work instead of being put behind bars. What extent

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