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Some people think certain prisoners be made to do unpaid community work instead of being put behind bars. What extent do you agree or disagree?

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It is often said that some prisoners should be considered as honorary in welfare of society. To a certain extent, I would agree that this kind of intiative will be help in our society's welfare. Moreover, This will also make them mentally and physically fit. On the on hand, where crime rate is increasing at an alarming speed and it is harming our community, and due to whom it is happening, they should be punished as unpaid work for society welfare.

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IELTS essay Some people think certain prisoners be made to do unpaid community work instead of being put behind bars. What extent

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