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News media is important in our society. Why is it so important? Do you think it's influence is generally positive or negative?

News media is important in our society. Why is it so important? Do you think it's influence is generally positive or negative? 3oAY
Nowadays any kind of information is available at our finger tips thanks to the advanced technology and media. As we are very much aware of our surroundings, we should know at least about our country and for that media support is needed. Firstly, the news channels are 24/7 available and it gives us all kind of information around the world like, rallies, perticular group's hunger strike, latest prime minister's speech, news about bollywood and hollywood and so on, as well as media is planning a vital role for the most types of news. In a recent news for example, India has launched many fighter jets for border security, and because of media; every child, every age of people knows about it. Additionally the whole world is also getting the same information therefore India is getting more attention as well as our enemies are also feeling afraid of our fastest development. On the other hand every citizen has right to know what's going on in our nation. Here's also our national reporters are there to inform us, for example about our economy growth for instance, India's GDP growth is getting 2% higher, nation's prime minister is sharing new scheme for farmers, simultaneously leaders are asking public opinion through the news-media. Secondly reporters are always available for live streaming such as during terrorist attact in Mumbai 2006 and through the media our commanders caught them easily. In my opinion I conclude that there are more positive factors rather then negative, however every coin has two sides, but as a responsible citizen I would say that there are enormously advantageous of media.
Nowadays any kind of information is available at our finger tips thanks to the advanced technology and
media
. As we are
very
much aware of our surroundings, we should know at least about our country and for that
media
support
is needed
.
Firstly
, the
news
channels are 24/7 available and it gives us all kind of information around the world like, rallies,
perticular
group's hunger strike,
latest
prime minister's speech,
news
about
bollywood
and
hollywood
and
so
on,
as well
as
media
is planning a vital role for the most types of
news
. In a recent
news
for example
, India has launched
many
fighter jets for border security, and
because
of
media
; every child, every age of
people
knows about it.
Additionally
the whole world is
also
getting the same information
therefore
India is getting more attention
as well
as our enemies are
also
feeling afraid of our fastest development.
On the other hand
every citizen has right to know what's going on in our nation. Here's
also
our national reporters are there to inform us,
for example
about our economy growth
for instance
, India's GDP growth is getting 2% higher, nation's prime minister is sharing
new
scheme for farmers,
simultaneously
leaders are asking public opinion through the news-media.
Secondly
reporters are always available for
live streaming
such as during terrorist
attact
in Mumbai 2006 and through the
media
our commanders caught them
easily
. In my opinion I conclude that there are more
positive
factors
rather
then
negative
,
however
every coin has two sides,
but
as a responsible citizen I would say that there are
enormously
advantageous of
media
.
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IELTS essay News media is important in our society. Why is it so important? Do you think it's influence is generally positive or negative?

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