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Some people think an international car-free day is an effective way to reduce air pollution. Others think there are more effective ways do to this. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

Nowadays, people’s dignity is valued by their job and education. Most of the people do jobs to earn money for their livings. It is generally believed that career is a significant role in people’s lives and I think that the determinant element of individual well-being is high salary and job security. First of all, living expenses in the current society are raised by the growth of gross domestic product. Therefore, sufficient salary is the essential individual’s factors. The higher salary you can earn, the more happiness you can get. For example, you can reside in better accommodations, access special facilities for your families and provide a high quality of education for your children. Secondly, there are many jobs earn a lot of profits but when the critical situation happens in the world such as COVID-19 pandemic it causes many damages for those entrepreneurs and every business especially travel and stock trading business. Consequently, Having a stable job by receiving money every month is more safer. For example, Government officer and state enterprise officer. On the other side, some people may see it as a boring but it still can survive in every crisis. To conclude, I believe that job pleasure and satisfaction is important in workplaces because if there is a good working environment and employees are happy, their productivity and enthusiasm to work will be better. Even though there are many things which make workers happy, it should be contributed from ourselves.

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job
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people
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jobs
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think
 that the determinant element of individual well-being is high salary and You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtaskappointmentofficebusinesscareerassignment
job
 security.

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current
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 by the growth of gross domestic product. Therefore
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get
. For example
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Secondly
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many
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jobs
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a lot of
 profits This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
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many
 damages for those entrepreneurs and every business especially
 travel and stock trading business. Consequently
, Having a stable You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtaskappointmentofficebusinesscareerassignment
job
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. For example
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Government
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people
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see
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but
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 can survive in every crisis.

To conclude
, I believe that You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtaskappointmentofficebusinesscareerassignment
job
 pleasure and satisfaction is This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:vitalcriticalessential
important
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because
 if there is a This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 working environment and employees are happy, their productivity and enthusiasm to work will be better. Even though
 there are This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 things which This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 workers happy, it should be contributed
 from ourselves. 