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Some people they that interview is the best method in recruiting staff but others say there are better ways. Discuss both views and give your opinion. v.2

Some people they that interview is the best method in recruiting staff but others say there are better ways. v. 2
In the modern world of work, interview is arguably the most popular method of selecting employees in the world. Some people even claim that it is also the best way to do the job but others disagree. In my opinion, the nature of the career would decide how suitable interview is in staff selection process. On the one hand, I agree that interview is absolutely necessary in most cases for two compelling reasons. Firstly, this is a perfect chance to employers to know more about their potential staff. Apart from basic information such as academic qualifications or work history that recruiters could find out easily in their candidates' CVs, they would have deeper understanding about the candidates' personalities like openness or motivation in direct communication, which is crucial in deciding who would be the most qualified to the position. Secondly, having a direct talk to the potential employer is normal the only chance for job seekers to show their skills, especially communication ones. Most of the professions nowadays do require workers to communicate one way or another; hence both the interviewers and candidates if they certainly can talk to each other before settling working relationship. On the other hand, I also believe that interview is not necessary in recruiting new staff working in some certain fields like science or computer programming. Obviously, choosing scientists or programmers with excellent communication skills is unrealistic since they mostly do their specialized tasks with full intellectual concentration and without frequent communication to other people. Also, the values of researchers or coders, illustrated in their past projects they have accomplished, appear unequivocally in their CVs, which could be easily acknowledged by the employers within seconds of reading instead of minutes or even hours of interviewing. Therefore, there is no need for employers to talk to potential staff who they have already had enough information to take into the consideration In conclusion, I strongly believe that interview is an effective method of recruiting staff across many occupations, but not in some highly specialized fields like science or computation.
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interview
is
arguably
the most popular method of selecting employees in the world.
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Some
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people
even claim that it is
also
the best way to do the job
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but
others disagree. In my opinion, the nature of the career would decide how suitable
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interview
is in
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staff
selection process.

On the one hand, I
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agree
that
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interview
is
absolutely
necessary
in most cases
for two compelling reasons.
Firstly
, this is a perfect chance to
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employers
to know more about their potential
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staff
. Apart from basic information such as academic qualifications or work history that recruiters could find out
easily
in their
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candidates&
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CVs
, they would have deeper understanding about the
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candidates&
#039; personalities like openness or motivation in direct
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communication
, which is crucial in deciding who would be the most qualified to the position.
Secondly
, having a direct talk to the potential
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employer
is normal the
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only
chance for job seekers to
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show
their
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skills
,
especially
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communication
ones. Most of the professions nowadays do require workers to communicate one way or another;
hence
both the interviewers and candidates if they
certainly
can talk to each
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other
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before
settling working relationship.

On the
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other
hand, I
also
believe that
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interview
is not necessary in recruiting new
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staff
working in
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some
certain fields like science or computer programming.
Obviously
, choosing scientists or programmers with excellent
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communication
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skills
is unrealistic since they
mostly
do their specialized tasks with full intellectual concentration and without frequent
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communication
to
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other
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people
.
Also
, the values of researchers or coders, illustrated in their past projects they have accomplished, appear
unequivocally
in their
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CVs
, which could be
easily
acknowledged by the
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employers
within seconds of reading
instead
of minutes or even hours of interviewing.
Therefore
, there is no need for
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employers
to talk to potential
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staff
who they have already had
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enough
information to take into the consideration

In conclusion
, I
strongly
believe that
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interview
is an effective method of recruiting
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staff
across
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many
occupations,
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but
not in
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some
highly
specialized fields like science or computation.
11Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
21Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
4Mistakes

IELTS essay Some people they that interview is the best method in recruiting staff but others say there are better ways. v. 2

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
342 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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