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some people that they should be able to keep all the money they earn .to what extend do you agree or disagree?

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Nowadays, people don’t tend to pay part of the financial to government who are obviously earned by making effort. However, in my point of view, tax is a charge which must be pay by people. As a result, I completely disagree to this idea. First of all, I strongly suppose the crucially significant portion of paying tax, is the undeniable effect on equalization among citizens who live in a same society due to this is payed based on determine percent of annually income. Actually to achieve this essential goal, some organization had been formed. I totally believe if people save all their income it would be possible to form different level in social life. On the other hand, don’t paying tax to the state is really negative and unfair sight on this essential system. Annually a huge number of hospitals, schools, entertainment places such as parks, public museums or theater and etc are built by government which is used and belong all of the citizens. Although, all we know those desperately need paying highly cost which government can’t afford alone. Eventually, it is compulsory that people pay part of their financial to renew and betterment their society. In conclusion, I totally disagree to this theory which is thought by someone who are living in a country.
Nowadays,
people
don’t tend to pay part of the financial to
government
who are
obviously
earned by making effort.
However
, in my point of view, tax is a charge which
must
be pay by
people
.
As a result
, I completely disagree to this
idea
.

First of all
, I
strongly
suppose the
crucially
significant portion of paying tax, is the undeniable effect on equalization among citizens who
live
in a same society due to this is
payed
based on determine percent of
annually
income. Actually to achieve this essential goal,
some
organization had
been formed
. I
totally
believe if
people
save all their income it would be possible to form
different
level in social life.

On the other hand
, don’t paying tax to the state is
really
negative
and unfair sight on this essential system.
Annually
a huge number of hospitals, schools, entertainment places such as parks, public museums or theater
and etc
are built
by
government
which is
used
and belong
all of the
citizens.
Although
, all we know those
desperately
need paying
highly
cost which
government
can’t afford alone.

Eventually
, it is compulsory that
people
pay part of their financial to renew and betterment their society.
In conclusion
, I
totally
disagree to this theory which is
thought
by someone who are living in a country.
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IELTS essay some people that they should be able to keep all the money they earn.

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216 words
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