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some people that the internet has bought people closer together others disagree claiming that the internet has made people more isolated. discuss both views and give your opine.

some people that the internet has bought people closer together others disagree claiming that the internet has made people more isolated. BN29

Technology puts impact on relationships in both ways positive or negative. It is thought by few folks that nowadays they live together by using digatalzation, while others give oppsite views of this statement these points will be elaborated in the hsubsequent fragments by me. To commence with, people who believe that people mortals are closer because of different social application including Facebook, Skype, and etc where they can talk with near ad etc where they can talk with them either video or voice call. To epitomize, it is published in the newspaper about 80% of folks maintains their relationship just with one touth. what

Technology puts impact on relationships in both ways This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:beneficial
positive
 or This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:adverse
negative
. It is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonedassumedbelievedconsidered
thought
 by few folks that nowadays they This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reside
live
 together by using Possible spelling mistake found.digitalization
digatalzation
, while others give Possible spelling mistake found.oppositeopp site
oppsite
 views of this statement these points will be elaborated
 in the Possible spelling mistake found.subsequenth subsequent
hsubsequent
 fragments by me.

To commence with, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 who believe that This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 mortals are closer This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 of This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:various
different
 social application including Facebook, Skype, Write the name of the item after 'and' or use only "etc".etc
and etc
 where they can talk with near ad etc where they can talk with them either video or voice call. To epitomize, it is published
 in the newspaper about 80% of folks maintains their relationship This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
 with one Possible spelling mistake found.southSouthmouthyouthtouchtruth
touth
. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterWhat
what