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some people that the internet has bought people closer together others disagree claiming that the internet has made people more isolated. discuss both views and give your opine.

some people that the internet has bought people closer together others disagree claiming that the internet has made people more isolated. BN29
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IELTS essay some people that the internet has bought people closer together others disagree claiming that the internet has made people more isolated.

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
103 words
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