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Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices.to waht extent do you agree or disagree wuth this statement?.

Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. to waht extent . rA96
Some people accept that modern life has wide number of options. I agree with the statement because the era of the internet and globalizatiin has provided us many benifical opportunites. It has also made the advailability of products easy. Many different website on internet provided numerous of information on different services. For instance, if we need knowledge on education sector then we can find it easily. It also allows people to choose jobs according to their qualification and also helps in finding new employment. It has expanded the number of option in different fields such as food, hospitals, entertainment. For example, earlier people used television with a limited choices of channels for entertainment while today we can watch whatever we like according to our needs and usually they are free. Moreover, we can find the quality of products in the cheap price and according to our choice. Globalization has decreased thr problems in international trade. It creates larger choice in foreign goods as well as local goods which improve our lifestyle. However, several number pf choices may even leads to purchase of the wrong products or services. It also creates difficulties in making decisions. For example, if there are a lots of schools which are suitable for us it will create confusion and leads to bad choice. In conclusion, huge number of choice in most areas of our life may mislead us we should be careful and should learn to recognize our real needs and values to make a right choice for our progress.
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accept that modern life has wide
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of options. I
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agree
with the statement
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the era of the internet and
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globalizatiin
has provided us
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many
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benifical
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opportunites
. It has
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made the
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advailability
of products easy.

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Many
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different
website on internet provided numerous of information on
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different
services.
For instance
, if we need knowledge on education sector then we can find it
easily
. It
also
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allows
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people
to choose jobs according to their qualification and
also
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helps
in finding new employment. It has expanded the
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number
of option in
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different
fields such as food, hospitals, entertainment.
For example
, earlier
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people
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used
television with a limited
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choices
of channels for entertainment while
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today
we can
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watch
whatever we like according to our needs and
usually
they are free.

Moreover
, we can find the quality of products in the
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cheap
price and according to our
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choice
. Globalization has decreased
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thr
problems in international trade. It creates larger
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choice
in foreign
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goods
as well
as local
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goods
which
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improve
our lifestyle.
However
, several
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number
pf
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choices
may even
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leads
to
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purchase
of the
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wrong
products or services. It
also
creates difficulties in making decisions.
For example
, if there are
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a lots
of schools which are suitable for us it will create confusion and leads to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
bad
choice.

In conclusion
, huge
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number
of
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choice
in most areas of our life may mislead us we should be careful and should learn to recognize our real needs and values to
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make
a right
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
choice
for our progress.
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IELTS essay Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. to waht extent .

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
254 words
6.0
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