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some people should keep all the money, they earn and should not pay tax to the state do you agree or disagree ?

some people should keep all the money, they earn and should not pay tax to the state WbXK
It has been observed that, many people should maintain their collect money as well as they will not pay tax to government. i certainly disagree with a statement and my opinion are justified further. there are several causes why laymen are not pay taxes. The most biggest issues government should not provide a public welfare service. By this I mean, they blame government for thing like lack of infrastructure, rising poverty and unemployment and other facilities. For instance, government can increase a high leval tax rate and tax slubs are unequal so, this people are not pay tax and avidness. furthermore, the laymen are not benefited from such expedition. In other words, majority of the revenue generated through public taxpayer which is usually from bourgeois class. This money if spent a roket and other space activity, will be not directly benefit to people. on the other hand, not paying tax can direct affect a country's revenue generation a lot of people can not pay tax so, nation economy are decrease, while make people aware where the taxes are being diverted. Even lowring the tax rates can help a country increase it is tax collection among taxpayers. To conclude, it can be said that in spite of it is duty of every citizen to pay tax as well as duty of every government to use it appropriately in public interest.
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been observed
that,
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many
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people
should maintain their collect money
as well
as they will not
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pay
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tax
to
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government
.
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i
certainly
disagree with a statement and my opinion
are justified
further
.
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there
are several causes why laymen are not
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pay
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taxes
. The
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most biggest
issues
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government
should not provide a public welfare service. By this I mean, they blame
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government
for thing like lack of infrastructure, rising poverty and unemployment and
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other
facilities.
For instance
,
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government
can increase a high
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leval
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tax
rate and
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tax
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slubs
are unequal
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so
, this
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people
are not
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pay
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tax
and
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avidness
.
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furthermore
, the laymen are not benefited from such expedition. In
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words,
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majority of
the revenue generated through public taxpayer which is
usually
from bourgeois
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class
. This money if spent a
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roket
and
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other
space activity, will be not
directly
benefit to
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people
.
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on
the
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other
hand, not paying
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tax
can direct affect a country's revenue generation
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a lot of
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people
can not
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pay
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tax
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so
, nation economy are decrease, while
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make
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people
aware where the
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taxes
are
being diverted
. Even
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lowring
the
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tax
rates can
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help
a country increase it is
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tax
collection among taxpayers.
To conclude
, it can
be said
that
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in spite of
it is duty of every citizen to
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pay
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tax
as well
as duty of every
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government
to
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use
it
appropriately
in public interest.

IELTS essay some people should keep all the money, they earn and should not pay tax to the state

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
229 words
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