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planting trees is very important. Some people says that trees should be planted in the vacant areas of cities and town, while others says that housing facilities should be built instead. Do you agree or disagree? v.1

planting trees is very important. Some people says that trees should be planted in the vacant areas of cities and town, while others says that housing facilities should be built instead. v. 1
That a plethora of individuals deem that trees should be planted free places of urbanand country; however, an overwhelming majority of people opine that alternatively housing facilities should be constructed is one of the most utterly debated issues in modern society. I partially agree with above-mentioned notion as the arguments for and against it are equal. This essay will discuss both sides of the supplied argument. On the one hand, the major reason why I claim that housing facilities should be built is because accommodation is one of the most common problems in today’s world. To be more specific, finding any vacant area for living is burdensome since the rate of population is growing on a regular basis; therefore, building house facilities can be beneficial for people’s life in terms of accommodation. Another convincing argument is that nowadays, house prices are unreasonably expensive in metropolises, due to the fact that if housing facilities are erected in suburban areas and towns, individuals are tend to live these areas because of low prices, as a result of which not only can demand for accommodations decrease, but the number of the population also are likely to reduce in huge cities. Nevertheless, I am also convinced that trees should be planted in vacant areas. In other words, trees are cut down on a daily basis at the same times as forest fires decline, the number of plants worldwide, owing to this reason that people should plant these areas in order to compensate. The second point to note is that plants and environment is interconnected with humans’ well-being, which means that if the number of trees dip all over the world, it can also fall the proportion of oxygen on the air, owing to which it can have a plethora of detrimental impacts on individuals’ health. By way of conclusion, considering aforementioned points, I somewhat agree that planting trees and building housing facilities share the same importance. I recommend that people not only built housing facilities but also plant trees in vacant areas.
That a plethora of individuals deem that
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trees
should
be planted
free places of
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urbanand
country;
however
, an overwhelming majority of
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people
opine that
alternatively
housing facilities should
be constructed
is one of the most
utterly
debated issues in modern society. I
partially
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
agree
with above-mentioned notion as the arguments for and against it are equal. This essay will discuss both sides of the supplied argument.

On the one hand, the major reason why I claim that housing facilities should
be built
is
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because
accommodation is one of the most common problems in
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
today
’s world. To be more specific, finding any vacant
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area
for living is burdensome since the rate of population is growing on a regular basis;
therefore
, building
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
house
facilities can be beneficial for
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people’s
life in terms of accommodation. Another convincing argument is that nowadays,
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
house
prices are
unreasonably
expensive in metropolises, due to the fact that if housing facilities
are erected
in suburban
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areas
and towns, individuals are
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tend
to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
live
these
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areas
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because
of low prices,
as a result
of which not
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only
can demand for accommodations decrease,
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but
the number of the population
also
are likely to
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reduce
in huge cities.

Nevertheless
, I am
also
convinced that
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trees
should
be planted
in vacant
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areas
.
In other words
,
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trees
are
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
cut
down on a daily basis at the same times as forest fires decline, the number of
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plants
worldwide, owing to this reason that
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people
should
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plant
these
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areas
in order to compensate. The second point to note is that
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plants
and environment
is interconnected
with humans’ well-being, which means that if the number of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
trees
dip all over the world, it can
also
fall the proportion of oxygen on the air, owing to which it can have a plethora of detrimental impacts on individuals’ health.

By way of conclusion, considering aforementioned points, I somewhat
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
agree
that planting
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trees
and building housing facilities share the same importance. I recommend that
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people
not
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only
built housing facilities
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
also
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plant
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trees
in vacant
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areas
.
16Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
20Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2Mistakes

IELTS essay planting trees is very important. Some people says that trees should be planted in the vacant areas of cities and town, while others says that housing facilities should be built instead. v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
338 words
6
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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