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Some people says cinema and political people saw any more what other says it is the responsibility to end for their struggle do you agree or disagree

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lot of
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teams
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defence
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lot of
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agree
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some
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but
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The political stars and is there a moon due to day of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withheartgrowthsoulactivity
life
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life
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makes
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make
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life
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time
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make
highly
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time
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but
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tickets
 it can be decreases.

The cinema industries and political This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
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life
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time
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life
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because
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time
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so
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think
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have to
 pay This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 of which amount and the grace of this has been This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
seen
 up to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
 it’s also
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knew
 that not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 a Force or shall celebrities This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
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Aham
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type of a
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man
 who is the both of the categories

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but
 the sports months of Possible spelling mistake found.AdamHamShamAhabAhaAhem
Aham
 same If 'type' is a classification term, 'a' is not necessary. Use "type of". (The phrases 'kind of' and 'sort of' are informal if they mean 'to some extent'.)type of
type of a
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualresidentcitizen
man
 who is the both of the categories

In This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
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agree
 with this statement This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 the political and the cinema have sacrificed their Did you mean "lives"?lives
life
 for their without depending on others without Did you forget something after 'the'?
the.