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Some people say we humans are harming the earth through our activities, but other people say we are improving the quality of life on our planet. Which opinion do you agree with? Use specific examples and reasons to support your opinion.

Some people say we humans are harming the earth through our activities, but other people say we are improving the quality of life on our planet. Which opinion do you agree with? Use specific examples and reasons to support your opinion. pam8d

Individuals face environment related issues because we are harming the planet by doing some activities, while, few argue that, citizens improve the precious of life on the earth by different infrastructures, I think human nature is responsible for damage the globe. I intend to put forth my arguments and I will give my opinion before writing the conclusion. In modern era, human beings live with latest technology as well as long-lasting infrastructure, but, indirectly, by doing so, we may harm the environment, we also damage air, consequently, people face numerous health related issues, sometimes, people do lots of things, like, use of plastics, garbage patches, celebration with fireworks, which, all are against the environment, it not only affects human beings, but, ozon layer also. For example, as per the study conducted by the Delhi authority, approximately, 45% ozon layer become damage through our harmful activities. Therefore, we all are responsible for loose our globe. What is more, no doubt, we are improving our life by different aspects, but, at that time, we are damaging the mother nature. For example, people use private vehicles often, hence, it creates carbon dioxide, and it is very dangerous gas for humans as well as air also. Further, authority make some adventurous buildings by cutting trees, therefore, it reduces the rainfall, so, countryside farmers face difficulties. For example, as per the study conducted by the BBC News, 20% farmers do suicide, because, they do not have enough money to control all field work, because, rainfall level are decreasing frequently. So, all steps, which, can damage the mother nature. In conclusion, I pen down saying that, no doubt, our life becomes easy way, but, in my perception, we harm the whole globe, by our daily routine activities, and, adding new things, which can damage the globe.

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because
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some
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improve
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 life on the earth by This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:various
different
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damage
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different
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use
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some
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, countryside farmers face difficulties. For example
, as per the study conducted by the BBC News, 20% farmers do suicide, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
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enough
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, rainfall level are decreasing frequently
. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
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damage
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In conclusion
, I pen down saying that, no doubt, our life becomes easy way, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
, in my perception, we harm the whole globe, by our daily routine activities, and, adding new things, which can You use this word too often, consider replacing it withblowdevastationharmillnesshardshipbruise
damage
 the globe. 