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The day in the desert last week

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Last week we went to the desert. When we went to the desert, we had some obstacles and positive things. The sand entered our eyes. The positive things that happened there we communicated with each other. Also, we cooked together. However, we also faced many problems. The sand entered our eyes. Also, our car was stuck on quicksand. When we were eating, the sand came on our food. Honestly, we enjoyed it. Eventually, it was a nice experience, and it will be not the last one.
Last week we went to the desert. When we went to the desert, we had
some
obstacles and
positive
things. The sand entered our eyes. The
positive
things that happened there we communicated with each other.
Also
, we cooked together.
However
, we
also
faced
many
problems. The sand entered our eyes.
Also
, our car
was stuck
on quicksand. When we were eating, the sand came on our food.
Honestly
, we enjoyed it.
Eventually
, it was a nice experience, and it will be not the last one.
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IELTS essay The day in the desert last week

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
86 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 7.0
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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