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Comparison of the City Hospital access layout

Comparison of the City Hospital access layout 6mgYx

In city design hospital location is most significant. considering the 2007 layout it was very simple access from city road, but in 2010 there are notable changes done in the layout. There are new additions and development can find like bus station and separation of the staff carpark and public car park with two roundabout to optimize the vehicle movement along the hospital and ring road. Allocation of separate place for the bus station rather bus stops along side the hospital road is a brilliant idea this will reduce the traffic movement in rush hous, It is an important fact to keep clear the access road since there are emergency vehicle movement on this road. Separation of the vehicle park and allotment of separate parking for the staff is a good thing. This will expand the capacity of the parking and the security for the all vehicals.

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 and public car park with two roundabout to optimize the vehicle movement along the hospital and ring road.

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 the hospital You use this word too often, consider replacing it withroadwaylaneboulevardthoroughfarecoursetrack
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 since there are emergency vehicle movement on this You use this word too often, consider replacing it withroadwaylaneboulevardthoroughfarecoursetrack
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. Separation of the vehicle park and allotment of separate parking for the staff is a This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
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