Search
Vocabularying
Listening
Reading
1. Academic
2. General
Writing
1. IELTSWriting Checker
2. IELTS Writing Samples
Speaking

Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.

Some People Say The The Main Environmental Problem Of Our Time Is The Loss Of Particular Species Of Plants And Animals

Some People Say The The Main Environmental Problem Of Our Time Is The Loss Of Particular Species Of Plants And Animals 1W3G

The environment plays an important role to support life on earth. Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. But others say that there is another important environment also. The other problems are caused by environmental problems like climatic change, biodiversity, etc. I shall discuss both the opposite points of view and try to express a pertinent opinion on this. On one hand, there is a lot of reason for decreasing animal and plants number. One of them is that year by year the atmosphere is becoming worse due to the fact a big amount of living creature has considerable decreases. For example: in every city, the industrial plant is there and sometimes from that some harmful gases released in the air it affects the environment it cause air pollutions. Moreover, the plethora of use of gas car it affects the environment. It affects the oxygen level in the air. That's why people nowadays having diseases like lung cancer and asthma. An example I want to portray is the excessive use of plastic products that affect the environment and animals. Sometimes people through plastic polythene on road and if animals eat they die because plastic contains harmful substances. On the other hand, is that due to the fact that animals are being used for different testing for humans benefits. For instance, people are using animals' skin for making cloth or some luxurious item like bags purse, or jackets. On the contrary, nowadays government has to take strict action on it. However, one best example is of tortoise they are becoming extinct consequently government is taking action either they punish or they charge the penalty and they have banned the sale of a tortoise. In my opinion, there are a plethora of other important environment issue people have to focus on that. A good illustration of this is, glaciers are melting due to the fact of the industrial revolution, carbon dioxide and other greenhouse gas emissions have raised temperature. Owing to the fact that floods occur and destroy the top layer of soil and full cities too. And also affect the water bodies which require the cold temperature to survive. To conclude, it is evident from the above-mentioned analysis that the extinction of wildlife and the resultant loss of biodiversity is certainly a grave issue. However, climatic change and the associated problems are even bigger challenges on they can threaten the very existence of life on the planet

The You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstatusclimatehabitatsurroundingssettingsituation
environment
 plays an This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:vitalcriticalessential
important
 role to support life on earth. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
Some
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 say that the main environmental You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcomplicationdilemmaquestionobstacletroubledispute
problem
 of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpetbeastcreature
animals
. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
But
 others say that there is another This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:vitalcriticalessential
important
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstatusclimatehabitatsurroundingssettingsituation
environment
also
. The You use this word too often, consider replacing it withnewalternativemore
other
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcomplicationdilemmaquestionobstacletroubledispute
problems
are caused
 by environmental You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcomplicationdilemmaquestionobstacletroubledispute
problems
 like climatic This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteradjust
change
, biodiversity, etc. I shall discuss both the opposite points of view and try to express a pertinent opinion on this.

On one hand, there is This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
a lot of
 reason for decreasing You use this word too often, consider replacing it withnaturalbodily
animal
 and plants number. One of them is that year by year the atmosphere is becoming worse due to the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcasematterlawexperienceevidence
fact
 a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:hugeenormousgiganticvast
big
 amount of living creature has considerable decreases. For example
: in every city, the industrial plant is there and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :in some instances
sometimes
 from that This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 harmful gases released in the air it You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdisturbupsetinfluenceinvolveinteresttouch
affects
 the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstatusclimatehabitatsurroundingssettingsituation
environment
 it Did you mean "causes"?causes
cause
 air pollutions. Moreover
, the plethora of This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
 of gas car it You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdisturbupsetinfluenceinvolveinteresttouch
affects
 the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstatusclimatehabitatsurroundingssettingsituation
environment
. It You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdisturbupsetinfluenceinvolveinteresttouch
affects
 the oxygen level in the air. That's why You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 nowadays having diseases like lung cancer and asthma. An example I want to portray is the excessive This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
 of plastic products that You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdisturbupsetinfluenceinvolveinteresttouch
affect
 the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstatusclimatehabitatsurroundingssettingsituation
environment
 and You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpetbeastcreature
animals
. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :in some instances
Sometimes
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 through plastic polythene on road and if You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpetbeastcreature
animals
 eat they This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :pass away
die
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 plastic contains harmful substances.

On the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withnewalternativemore
other
 hand, is that due to the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcasematterlawexperienceevidence
fact
 that You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpetbeastcreature
animals
 are being This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 for This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:various
different
 testing for humans benefits. For instance
, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 are using animals' skin for making cloth or This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 luxurious item like bags purse, or jackets.

On the contrary
, nowadays This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :national authoritypublic authority
government
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:oughts to
has to
 take strict action on it. However
, one best example is of tortoise they are becoming extinct consequently
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :national authoritypublic authority
government
 is taking action either they punish or they charge the Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).penalty, and
penalty and
 they have banned the sale of a tortoise.

In my opinion, there are a plethora of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withnewalternativemore
other
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:vitalcriticalessential
important
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstatusclimatehabitatsurroundingssettingsituation
environment
 issue You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
 focus on that. A This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 illustration of this is, glaciers are melting due to the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcasematterlawexperienceevidence
fact
 of the industrial revolution, carbon dioxide and You use this word too often, consider replacing it withnewalternativemore
other
 greenhouse gas emissions have raised temperature. Owing to the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcasematterlawexperienceevidence
fact
 that floods occur and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :demolishruin
destroy
 the top layer of soil and full cities too. And also
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdisturbupsetinfluenceinvolveinteresttouch
affect
 the water bodies which require the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :chillyfrosty
cold
 temperature to survive.

To conclude
, it is evident from the above-mentioned analysis that the extinction of wildlife and the resultant loss of biodiversity is certainly
 a grave issue. However
, climatic This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteradjust
change
 and the associated You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcomplicationdilemmaquestionobstacletroubledispute
problems
 are even bigger challenges on they can threaten the This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 existence of life on the planet