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Some people say that we do not need printed newspapers anymore. Do you agree?

Some people say that we do not need printed newspapers anymore. Do you agree? oElXV
It is argued by some people that printed new materials are no longer needed, due to the advent of technology and digital devices because this allows people to pursue a wider range of news and instantaneous information. In my opinion, I agreed that gather news through methods that are time-efficient and advance is taking over in the modern day, however, there are some aspects that can not be compete with printed newspapers. One one hand, it is undeniable that keeping up with the current affairs is indispensable because it provides us with a deeper understanding in many fields, so if there is a better way of approaching information it is most likely to be welcome by the majority and this is something that e-plubications have the ability to cope with. First of all, in the present-day, digital device is a part of everyone life, because of that we can easily have access to all form of information and news via the internet or by TV. Back in the day, if someone wants to inform themselves with news they need to buy newspapers, which is time-consuming, but today, they can stay idle and still keep them posted. Moreover, because of its simplication in accessing, more articles, blogs and news are being posted on the Internet, which increase the readers’ exposure to wider range of publications, and most materials are tailor-made for a more enjoyful and entertaining purpose, viewers are more likely to be attracted. On the flip side, the idea of printing newspapers is still irreplaceable due to a couple of reasons. Firstly, even though we all acknowledged that the amount of information provided by the Internet is immeasureable, there is a higher risk of encounter misleading and deceptive information because publishers are sometimes in a rush to public news and make little effort to actually control and edit the content. For example, there are many story that are all made-up for profit purpose but still acquire the qualification. Furthermore, if someone is informed with biased information, it can create a disortion and disorder in their existing knowledge. To recapitulate, i don’t have any criticism on appoarching information through the Internet nor the physical broadsheets, however, it is not something that should be overwhelming, and readers need to be judicious in choosing what to believe and what is not.
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that printed
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materials are no longer needed, due to the advent of technology and digital devices
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because
this
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allows
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people
to pursue a wider range of
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news
and instantaneous
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information
. In my opinion, I
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agreed
that gather
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news
through methods that are time-efficient and advance is taking over in the modern day,
however
, there are
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some
aspects that can not be
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compete
with printed newspapers.

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One one
hand, it is undeniable that keeping up with the
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current
affairs is indispensable
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because
it provides us with a deeper understanding in
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many
fields,
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so
if there is a better way of approaching
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information
it is most likely to be welcome by the majority and this is something that
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e-plubications
have the ability to cope with.
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, in the present-day, digital device is a part of everyone life,
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because
of that we can
easily
have access to all form of
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information
and
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news
via the internet or by TV. Back in the day, if someone wants to inform themselves with
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news
they need to
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buy
newspapers, which is time-consuming,
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today
, they can stay idle and
still
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keep
them posted.
Moreover
,
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because
of its
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simplication
in accessing, more articles, blogs and
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news
are
being posted
on the Internet, which increase the readers’ exposure to wider range of publications, and most materials are tailor-made for a more
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enjoyful
and entertaining purpose, viewers are more likely to
be attracted
.

On the flip side, the
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idea
of printing newspapers is
still
irreplaceable due to a couple of reasons.
Firstly
,
even though
we all acknowledged that the amount of
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information
provided by the Internet is
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immeasureable
, there is a higher
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risk
of encounter misleading and deceptive
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information
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because
publishers are
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sometimes
in a rush to public
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news
and
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make
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little
effort to actually control and edit the content.
For example
, there are
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many story
that are all made-up for profit purpose
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but
still
acquire the qualification.
Furthermore
, if someone
is informed
with biased
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information
, it can create a
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disortion
and disorder in their existing knowledge.

To recapitulate,
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i
don’t have any criticism on
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appoarching
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information
through the Internet nor the physical broadsheets,
however
, it is not something that should be overwhelming, and readers need to be judicious in choosing what to believe and what is not.
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IELTS essay Some people say that we do not need printed newspapers anymore. Do you agree?

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
388 words
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