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Everyone should become yegelorion becouse lhey do not need lo eol rneof lo have o heolthy dief. Io whot exfent do you ogree or disogree?

Everyone should become yegelorion becouse lhey do not need lo eol rneof lo have o heolthy dief. Io whot exfent do you ogree or disogree? Nmjpd
A lot of scientific evidence indicates that wholesome vegetarian diets offer distinct advantages compared to diets containinB meat. However, I disagree with the given statement that everyone should adopt a meatfree diet to be healthy. ln this essay I intend to support my opinion with my arguments. Undoubtedly, there are many benefits of a vegetarian diet. To begin with, vegetarian diets are easy to digest, whereas meats can be difficult to digest. The fats in meat are saturated, which means they are unhealthy and contribute to higher cholesterol levels. Plant sources of food, on the other hand, are rich in fiber, complex carbohydrates, magnesium, folic acid, vitamin c and E, carotenoids and other phytochemicals. Dietary fiber helps prevent colon cancer, which is more prevalent in meat-eaters. However, a totally vegetarian diet can be deficient in several nutrients including protein, iron, zinc, calcium, vitamin 812 and A, n-3 fatty acids and iodine. Although vegetarians can consume protein through legumes and nuts, these protein sources are incomplete. A complete protein contains the essential amino acids that your body needs, and animal products provide a complete protein. Many animal products are also high in iron and vitamin 812. lron found in animal products is easier for your body to absorb. A deficiency in iron or 812 can result in fatigue. For women, who lose iron through menstruation, getting enough iron through their diet is important. To sum up, I reiterate that although a vegetarian diet has several benefits, I differ with those who say that everyone should turn vegetarian to be healthy. makkarlELTS I www. makkarlELTS. com Proponents of vegetarian diet claim that veggie diets have high-protein gems like cottage cheese, nuts, and tofu. I still believe that people who go vegetarian may have to take a lot of supplements, and would definitely need to put in a lot of effort to have a balanced meal full of essential macro and micronutrients. A purely vegetarian diet, which is not planned well, may prove very bad for health. People, who are nonvegetarian, can easily have a mix of vegetarian and non-veBetarian diet to remain healthy. They can cut down their meat intake to avoid the detrimental effects of a non-veg diet.
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scientific evidence indicates that wholesome vegetarian diets offer distinct advantages compared

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diets
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, I disagree with the
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statement that everyone should adopt a
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diet to be healthy.
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ln
this essay I intend to support my opinion with my arguments.

Undoubtedly
, there are
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many
benefits of a vegetarian diet. To
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begin
with, vegetarian diets are easy to

digest, whereas
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meats
can be difficult to digest. The fats in
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meat
are saturated
, which means they are

unhealthy and contribute to higher cholesterol levels. Plant sources of food,
on the other hand
, are rich in

fiber, complex carbohydrates, magnesium, folic acid,
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vitamin c
and E, carotenoids and other

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phytochemicals
. Dietary fiber
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helps
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colon cancer, which is more prevalent in meat-eaters.

However
, a
totally
vegetarian diet can be deficient in several nutrients including protein,
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iron
, zinc, calcium,

vitamin 812 and A, n-3 fatty acids and iodine. Although vegetarians can consume protein through legumes

and nuts, these protein sources are incomplete. A complete protein contains the essential amino acids that

your body needs, and animal products provide a complete protein.
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Many
animal products are
also
high in

iron and vitamin 812.
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lron
found in animal products is easier for your body to absorb. A deficiency in
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iron
or

812 can result in fatigue. For women,
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who
lose
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iron
through menstruation, getting
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enough
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iron
through

their diet is
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important
.

To sum up, I reiterate that although a vegetarian diet has several benefits, I differ with those
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say that

everyone should turn vegetarian to be healthy.

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makkarlELTS
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Proponents of vegetarian diet claim that veggie diets have high-protein gems like cottage cheese, nuts, and

tofu. I
still
believe that
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people
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who
go vegetarian may
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have to
take
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supplements, and would

definitely need to put in
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a lot of
effort to have a balanced meal full of essential macro and micronutrients.

A
purely
vegetarian diet, which is not planned well, may prove
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very
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bad
for health.
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People
,
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are
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nonvegetarian
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can
easily
have a mix of vegetarian and
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non-veBetarian
diet to remain healthy. They can
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cut


down their
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meat
intake to avoid the detrimental effects of a non-veg diet.
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IELTS essay Everyone should become yegelorion becouse lhey do not need lo eol rneof lo have o heolthy dief. Io whot exfent do you ogree or disogree?

Essay
  American English
8 paragraphs
367 words
5.5
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