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Some people say that university student should pay the full cost of their educationother say that university education should be freediscuss both views and give your opinionadd relevant example from your own knowledge and experience v.1

Some people say that university student should pay the full cost of their educationother say that university education should be free 1
In this age of cut throat competition, higher education has become the prominent part to lead a successful lifestyle. Whether university student should pay their educational costs or not has sparked a heated debate. IN this essay, I would like to state my views in for and against of the statement with my notion Multifarious points are there to shore up my view. To start with, education Is something which requires dedication and full attention to master. Thence, it is next to impossible to carry your education along with working in order to support your education. so, education should always be made free for students. To be specific, one cannot top the education while doing job and there is no place for those students who remain average or above average. while others have conflicting views. According to them, Students are often spotted wasting their time in doing useless curriculum activities like as watching movies, playing and so on. They believe that the time being wasted in these activities could be utilised by working. Thus, they can support themselves by utilising their free time. For instance, APJ Abdul Kalam, the former president of India, used to sell newspaper in order to support his study, became the famous scientist of the country later with his own hard work from my notion, few year of study has to decide our whole future. better not to risk it by donating your time to work on account of supporting your education. So, government ought to step up and make study free for students. On contrary, free time must be fully utilised by student by working if they can afford to do so without hurting their study To recapitulate, it is said that today' s students are the heroes of tomorrow. government should offer all the possible help to these heroes so they can put their nation on shiny side in future
In this age of
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cut throat
competition, higher
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education
has become the prominent part to lead a successful lifestyle. Whether university
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student
should pay their educational costs or not has sparked a heated debate. IN this essay, I would like to state my views in for and against of the statement with my
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notion


Multifarious points are there to shore up my view. To
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start
with,
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education
Is something which requires dedication and full attention to master. Thence, it is
next
to impossible to carry your
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education
along with working in order to support your
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education
.
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so
,
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education
should always
be made
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free
for
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students
. To be specific, one cannot top the
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education
while doing job and there is no place for those
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students
who remain average or above average.
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while
others have conflicting views.

According to them,
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Students
are
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often
spotted wasting their
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time
in doing useless curriculum activities like as watching movies, playing and
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so
on. They believe that the
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time
being wasted
in these activities could be
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utilised
by working.
Thus
, they can support themselves by
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utilising
their
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free
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time
.
For instance
, APJ Abdul
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Kalam
, the former president of India,
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used
to sell newspaper in order to support his study, became the
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famous
scientist of the country later with his
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own
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hard
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work


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from
my notion,
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few year
of study
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has to
decide our whole future.
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better
not to
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risk
it by donating your
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time
to work on account of supporting your
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education
.
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So
,
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government
ought to step up and
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make
study
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free
for
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students
. On contrary,
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free
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time
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must
be
fully
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utilised
by
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student
by working if they can afford to do
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so
without hurting their
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study


To recapitulate, it
is said
that
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today&
#039; s
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students
are the heroes of tomorrow.
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government
should offer all the possible
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help
to these heroes
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so
they can put their nation on shiny side in
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future
2Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
23Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
17Mistakes

IELTS essay Some people say that university student should pay the full cost of their educationother say that university education should be free 1

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
315 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
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