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Many people regard film as less important art forms than literature and paintings To what extent do you agree o disagree v.2

Many people regard film as less important art forms than literature and paintings 2
It is true that arts play a greater importance on how we preserve our cultural heritage. Some people believe that traditional arts such as literature and paintings are the most important, I believe that film is the most valuable art form. To begin with, many people regarded film as a public art because it is the most popular art form. It is the only art form that is entertaining and can be easily comprehended. For example, the study made in Queensland University revealed that the majority of the students had a positive experience in watching a movie than visiting a museum. This happens due to the fact that it is not particularly difficult to interpret the art value in the movie and that the expression of emotion can be readily conveyed. In contrast, if a cinema is not a place of art, the only place that we can express our emotion is in the museum which is less interesting. Furthermore, a film can be considered as a combination of several art forms. Unlike old forms of art namely literature, poems, paintings, and novels, a film combines some art medium such as performance art, visual art, and modern art making it a multi-art. For instance, in the recent UK survey, most of the respondents voted film watching as their favorite leisure time than reading novels. This clearly supports that film has been the most effective way of expressing art. In conclusion, although there are other ways to express our emotions through arts, I believe that most popular and effective art form is still the film because it is well supported by many people and it has the combination of a medium.
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play a greater importance on how we preserve our cultural heritage.
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believe that traditional
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such as literature and paintings are the most
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important
, I believe that film is the most valuable
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form.

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regarded film as a public
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art
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because
it is the most popular
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art
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. It is the
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only
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art
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form
that is
entertaining and can be
easily
comprehended.
For example
, the study made in Queensland University revealed that the majority of the students had a
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positive
experience in watching a movie than visiting a museum. This happens due to the fact that it is not
particularly
difficult to interpret the
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art
value in the movie and that the expression of emotion can be
readily
conveyed.
In contrast
, if a cinema is not a place of
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art
, the
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only
place that we can express our emotion is in the museum which is less interesting.

Furthermore
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as a combination of several
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art
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forms
. Unlike
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forms
of
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art
namely
literature, poems, paintings, and novels, a film combines
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some
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art
medium such as performance
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art
, visual
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art
, and modern
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art
making it a multi-art.
For instance
, in the recent UK survey, most of the respondents voted film watching as their favorite leisure time than reading novels. This
clearly
supports that film has been the most effective way of expressing art.

In conclusion
, although there are other ways to express our emotions through
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arts
, I believe that most popular and effective
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art
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form
is
still
the film
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because
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well supported
by
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many
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people
and it has the combination of a medium.
11Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
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IELTS essay Many people regard film as less important art forms than literature and paintings 2

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
280 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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