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Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreing language is in order to travel to or work in a foreign country. Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn foreign language. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. v.1

Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreing language is in order to travel to or work in a foreign country. Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn foreign language. v. 1
Learning foreign languages means different things for different people. Some people learn it to work in foreign countries, while others believe that there are more reasons other than working abroad. I personally believe that working overseas require their local languages for communication for certain jobs and visiting the country, but it would be quite unwise to give the credit solely for the purpose of travelling. People tour globally for various reasons, thus create the need of being bilingual. First of all, it is due to new opportunity arising from employment. Foreign languages are considered pre-requisites for the role which the employee is hired. Therefore, learning a new alien language becomes important. For instance, If an employee gets an offer from a multinational company, he will have to travel overseas. It will become harder for him to speak to customers or communicate with the local inhabitants. Hence, foreign languages are required to understand the locals and adapt their culture and tradition. On the other hand, There are several other reasons to travel overseas. Travelling to global destinations as a tourist or foreign exchange student demands to comprehend the native tongue of the country. It can be difficult to read the sign boards, directions and several different aspects within the nation. In other words, reading maps in Spanish or French is difficult if you do not have the knowledge of it. You become confused if you are not with a tourist guide or a Spanish or a French dictionary. Therefore, being competent in the respective dialect is inevitable. In my opinion, learning any languages is difficult, but not necessary as in most cases knowing a single one is enough. English is a global language and it is spoken in almost every country. Foreign languages may not be a necessity as there are English versions of every sign board, brochures, maps or any other things required by the traveller. For example, In countries such as France, the maps are as printed on two sides; one in French and the other in English. This makes it clear that global languages can replace the requirement of native speech. In conclusion, learning foreign languages is only required if the job demands the know how of the local speech or if he wants to personally learn it as a hobby. English being the world's Achilles heel can eliminate the need for the difficulties faced by travellers for not knowing the language.
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means
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different
things for
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people
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people
learn it to work in
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foreign
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countries
, while others believe that there are more reasons
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other
than working abroad. I
personally
believe that working overseas require their
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local
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languages
for communication for certain jobs and visiting the
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country
,
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but
it would be quite unwise to give the credit
solely
for the purpose of travelling.

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People
tour globally for various reasons,
thus
create the need of being bilingual.
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First of all
, it is due to new opportunity arising from employment.
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Foreign
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languages
are considered
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pre-requisites
for the role which the employee
is hired
.
Therefore
,
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learning
a new alien
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language
becomes
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important
.
For instance
, If an employee
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gets
an offer from a multinational
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company
, he will
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have to
travel overseas. It will become harder for him to speak to customers or communicate with the
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local
inhabitants.
Hence
,
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foreign
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languages
are required
to understand the
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locals
and adapt their culture and tradition.

On the
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other
hand, There are several
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other
reasons to travel overseas. Travelling to global destinations as a tourist or
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foreign
exchange student demands to comprehend the native tongue of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
country
. It can be difficult to read the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
sign
boards, directions and several
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
different
aspects within the nation. In
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
other
words, reading maps in Spanish or French is difficult if you do not have the knowledge of it. You become confused if you are not with a tourist guide or a Spanish or a French dictionary.
Therefore
, being competent in the respective dialect is inevitable.

In my opinion,
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learning
any
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languages
is difficult,
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but
not necessary as
in most cases
knowing a single one is
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enough
. English is a global
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language
and it
is spoken
in almost every
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country
.
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Foreign
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languages
may not be a necessity as there are English versions of every
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
sign
board, brochures, maps or any
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other
things required by the
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traveller
.
For example
, In
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countries
such as France, the maps are as printed on two sides; one in French and the
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other
in English. This
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makes
it
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clear
that global
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languages
can replace the requirement of native speech.

In conclusion
,
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learning
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foreign
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languages
is
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only
required if the job demands the know how of the
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local
speech or if he wants to
personally
learn it as a hobby. English being the world's Achilles heel can eliminate the need for the difficulties faced by
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travellers
for not knowing the
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language
.
8Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
8Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
8Mistakes

IELTS essay Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreing language is in order to travel to or work in a foreign country. Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn foreign language. v. 1

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
404 words
8
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 8.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 8.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 8.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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