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Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. mwKd
These days, an increasing number of people tend to reckon that the most important issue nowadays is that some plants and animals might stop existing. Notwithstanding, other individuals are claim that there is another significant issues. In this essay, I will consider both perspectives and give my personal point of view at the end. Fist of all, the reason why our generation should have to preserve the endangered species is that wildlife’s food chain will be broken. Instead of consuming species that they eate on daily basic, they will be forced to starve and, as a result, it could seriously affect on number of wild creatures which are alive due to the fact that living creatures they may die of starvation. For instance, it is widely believed that the number of snow leopards are dramatically decreased, owing to the fact that there are now, less pyrenean ibexes in comparison with few decades ago. It is worth mentioning that snow leopards commonly subsist by eating pyrenean ibexes. Turning to the other side, global warming is a major problem and it is thought by a handful people that it is the pressing issue, which individuals should tackle at first. Furthermore, the climate changes could severe impact and, as a consequence, if the natural inhabitant will become draught so, animals could not survive anymore. In addition, according to the research which was conducted in 2019 the plethora of wild creatures which could stop existing have already lost their dwelling space because of the global warming. Thus, it makes it clear that individuals should have to consider this problem as the most significant and solve it as soon as it possible. In conclusion, although it is a common belief that preventive measures are unnecessary, notwithstanding, I am entirely persuaded that the arguments I mentioned above outweigh this idea
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Fist of all, the reason why our generation should
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preserve the endangered species is that wildlife’s food chain will
be broken
.
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of consuming species that they
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eate
on daily basic, they will
be forced
to starve and,
as a result
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seriously
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affect
on number of wild creatures which are alive due to the fact that living creatures they may
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die
of starvation.
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widely
believed that the number of snow leopards are
dramatically
decreased, owing to the fact that there are
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now
, less
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pyrenean
ibexes
in comparison
with few decades ago. It is worth mentioning that snow leopards
commonly
subsist by eating
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pyrenean
ibexes.

Turning to the other side, global warming is a major problem and it is
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thought
by a handful
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people
that it is the pressing issue, which individuals should tackle at
first
.
Furthermore
, the climate
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severe
impact and, as a consequence, if the natural inhabitant will become
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draught
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so
, animals could not survive anymore.
In addition
, according to the research which
was conducted
in 2019 the plethora of wild creatures which could
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stop
existing have already lost their dwelling space
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because
of the global warming.
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it
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that individuals should
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consider this problem as the most significant and solve it as
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soon
as
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it
possible.

In conclusion
, although it is a common belief that preventive measures are unnecessary, notwithstanding, I am
entirely
persuaded that the arguments I mentioned above outweigh this
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idea
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IELTS essay Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems.

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  American English
4 paragraphs
303 words
6.0
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