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Some people say that the bicycles are a good modern means of transportation other say riding a bicycle has clear disadvantages. Discuss both views and give own opinion.

Using the bicycles has always been popular with a certain group of people and they have persuasive arguments in favor of using this too for transportation. By contrast there are other people who do not suggest using the bicycles because of its drawbacks. I personally believe that the advantages are more noticeable. On the one hand, many commentators are of the view that there are disadvantages to use the bicycles as a mode of transportation. From their point of view, although riding the bicycles can be enjoyable in warm or cool seasons, users find it difficult to use than in winter and autumn and even it can be dangerous at bad weather conditions. It is also mentioned that the bicycles are not safe and if individuals fell down or banged to other vehicles, they may need urgent medical attention. On the other hand, they are those who subscribe to the opinion that the bicycles have several benefits. They argue that the bicycles are one of the best means of transportation especially, during rush hour, when people are commuting from or to work and streets are congested by vehicles, people can benefit from them otherwise, it takes them ages to reach their destination. It is also believed that from an environmental point of view, a bicycle is a clear form of transport and commuting via that reduces pollution from car emissions. From my personal experience, as riding a bicycle is a kind of exercising, people who ride it on a regular basis are more likely to be healthy. Another positive aspect of that is to make individuals fit and in a good shape. In conclusion, in spite of downsides about the bicycles, I believe merits are far more because it is sustainable, fast and makes individuals healthy.
Using the
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bicycles
has always been popular with a certain group of
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people and
they have persuasive arguments in favor of using this too for transportation. By contrast there are other
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people
who do not suggest using the
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bicycles
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because
of its drawbacks. I
personally
believe that the advantages are more noticeable.

On the one hand,
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many
commentators are of the view that there are disadvantages to
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use
the
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bicycles
as a mode of transportation. From their point of view, although riding the
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bicycles
can be enjoyable in warm or cool seasons, users find it difficult to
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use
than in winter and autumn and even it can be
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dangerous
at
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bad
weather conditions. It is
also
mentioned that the
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bicycles
are not safe and if individuals fell down or banged to other vehicles, they may need urgent medical attention.

On the other hand
, they are those who subscribe to the opinion that the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
bicycles
have several benefits. They argue that the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
bicycles
are one of the best means of transportation
especially
, during rush hour, when
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people
are commuting from or to work and streets
are congested
by vehicles,
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people
can benefit from them
otherwise
, it takes them ages to reach their destination. It is
also
believed that from an environmental point of view, a
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bicycle
is a
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
clear
form of transport and commuting via that
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
reduces
pollution from car emissions.

From my personal experience, as riding a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
bicycle
is a kind of exercising,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
who ride it on a regular basis are more likely to be healthy. Another
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
positive
aspect of
that is
to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
individuals fit and in a
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
shape.

In conclusion
,
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in spite of
downsides about the
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bicycles
, I believe merits are far more
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because
it is sustainable,
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fast
and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
makes
individuals healthy.

IELTS essay Some people say that the bicycles are a good modern means of transportation other say riding a bicycle has clear disadvantages.

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
296 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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