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Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social and practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

When anyone has to talk in another language but he does not know so this situation may create severe social and practical troubles. As a rule, language is used as a medium to communicate with people, if they are not well in the use of this specific tool as per the country, it can be turned into the worst situation. I am in favor of this statement and I will highlight some important points in favor of my agreement. There are two key points that need to be understood accurately. First of all, in English, there are many words that are the same in sound but in spelling, they are different as well as meanings that are different too, such as see and sea, two or too, same and shame. I will explain that if a person does not know the right pronunciation of same and shame and he says to his boss or customer that "you shame as like my brother" instead of "you are same as like my brother" so this situation can create a worse condition. 2nd reason, in many languages the same words has a different meaning and social value. To illustrate, In England, the rubber word is used for the eraser which can remove the pencil writing but in America, the word rubber is used for the popular contraceptive. For example, there is a man in the office in America, he is not aware of the actual meaning of rubber and if he asked rubber from a female colleague so this situation can make him embarrassed and even he could be in an investigation. In Conclusion, language can be creating a social and practical problem if people do not know the appropriate word or accent of any specific society. It is really very significant to learn the language of the country where the person needs to go for any reason.
When anyone
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has to
talk in another
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language
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but
he does not
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know
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so
this
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situation
may create severe social and practical troubles. As a
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rule
,
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language
is
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used
as a medium to communicate with
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people
, if they are not well in the
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use
of this specific tool as per the country, it can
be turned
into the worst
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situation
. I am in favor of this statement and I will highlight
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some
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important
points in favor of my agreement.

There are two key points that need to
be understood
accurately
.
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First of all
, in English, there are
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many
words that are the same in sound
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but
in spelling, they are
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different
as well
as meanings that are
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different
too, such as
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see
and sea, two or too, same and shame. I will
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explain
that if a person does not know the right pronunciation of same and
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shame and
he says to his boss or customer that
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"
you shame as like my brother
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"
instead
of
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"
you are same as like my brother
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"
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so
this
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situation
can create a worse condition.

2nd reason, in
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many
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languages
the same words has a
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different
meaning and social value.

To illustrate, In England, the
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rubber
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word
is
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used
for the eraser which can remove the pencil writing
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but
in America, the
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word
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rubber
is
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used
for the popular contraceptive.
For example
, there is a
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man
in the office in America, he is not aware of the actual meaning of
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rubber
and if he asked
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rubber
from a female
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colleague
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so
this
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situation
can
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make
him embarrassed and even he could be in an investigation.

In Conclusion
,
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language
can be creating a social and practical problem if
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people
do not know the appropriate
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word
or accent of any specific society. It is
really
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very
significant to learn the
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language
of the country where the person needs to go for any reason.
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IELTS essay Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social and practical problems.

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
315 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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