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Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social and practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Sever societal and practical troubles can be arisen when anyone have to talk on other one’s language. The language is used as medium to communicate with people, if they are not well in use of this specific tool as per the country, it can be turned into worst situation. I am in favor of this statement and I will highlight the some important points in favor of my agreement. There are two key points which need to be understood accurately. To be begin with, the language is one of the important thing of any country and there are many words are same sound alike or some type very minor difference in pronunciation or in spelling too such as see and sea, bad or bat, two or too, same and shame. I will explain that if a person is in USA and does not to speak in English in very well manner or does not know right pronunciation of a same and shame and he have said that you shame as like brother instead of you are same as like my brother, and the person of in front of his boss, customer and competitor so this situation can create worse condition for him. 2nd reason, in many languages the same words has a different meaning and social value. To illustrate, In England, rubber word is used for the eraser which can remove the pencil writing but in Amrica, the word rubber is used for the popular contraceptive. So if the individual does not know the actual meaning of that region or territory so person can be in terrible situation. For example, the shopkeeper in America, is not aware and he have given condom to a lady instead of eraser so this situation can make him embarrassed and even he could be in investigation if lady raise her complain. In Conclusion, the language can be creating a social and practical problem if people do not the appropriate word or accent. It is really very significant to learn the language of the country where the person needs to go for any reason.
Sever societal and practical troubles can
be arisen
when anyone
The pronoun ‘anyone’ is usually used with a third-person or a past tense verb: “has”, “had”.
have
to talk on other one’s
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
language
. The
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language
is
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
used
as medium to communicate with
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
, if they are not well in
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
of this specific tool as per the country, it can
be turned
into
A determiner is probably missing here: “the worst”.
worst
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
situation
. I am in favor of this statement and I will highlight the
Did you mean “same”?
some
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
important
points in favor of my agreement. There are two key points which need to
be understood
accurately
. To be
The past participle is required after “To be”.
begin
with, the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
language
is one of the
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
important
thing of any country and there are
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
words are same sound alike or
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
type
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
minor difference in pronunciation or in spelling
Did you mean “to such”?
too such
as
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
see
and sea,
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
bad
or bat, two or too, same and shame. I will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
explain
that if a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
person
is
A determiner is probably missing here: “in the USA”.
in USA
and does not to speak in English in
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
well manner or does not know right pronunciation of a same and
Use a comma before ‘and’ if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
shame and
he
The pronoun ‘he’ is usually used with a third-person or a past tense verb: “has”, “had”.
have
said that you shame as like brother
instead
of you are same as like my brother, and the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
person
of in front of his boss, customer and
Use a comma before ‘so’ if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
competitor
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
this
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
situation
can create worse condition for him. 2nd reason, in
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
languages
the same words has a
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
different
meaning and social value. To illustrate, In England, rubber
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
word
is
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
used
for the eraser which can remove the pencil writing
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
in
Possible spelling mistake found.
Amrica
, the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
word
rubber is
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
used
for the popular contraceptive.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
So
if the individual does not know the actual meaning of that region or
Use a comma before ‘so’ if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
territory
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
person
can be in terrible
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
situation
.
For example
, the shopkeeper in America, is not
Use a comma before ‘and’ if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
aware and
he
The pronoun ‘he’ is usually used with a third-person or a past tense verb: “has”, “had”.
have
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
given
condom to a lady
instead
of
Use a comma before ‘so’ if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
eraser
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
this
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
situation
can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
him embarrassed and even he could be in investigation if lady raise her complain.
In Conclusion
, the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
language
can be creating a social and practical problem if
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
do not the appropriate
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
word
or accent. It is
really
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
significant to learn the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
language
of the country where the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
person
needs to go for any reason.
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IELTS essay Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social and practical problems.

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
349 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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