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Some people say that the best way to promote products is to advertise them on the internet. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Some people say that the best way to promote products is to advertise them on the internet. with this statement? GJV2L
We live in a day and age when advertising is seem to some people as the best method for promoting products. This essay will agree with the stated idea and discuss the primary reasons behind it. Firstly, it is an undeniable fact that more and more people have tendency to skip advertisements on internet even while they are watching their favorite influencer who earns living from including commercials into their blog videos. In other words, watching advertisements on internet seem as wasting time for a number of people and whatever the concept of commercial they see not interesting for them. For example, the study has been carried out by the researchers of Manchester university depicts that the user rate of adblockers has been dramatically increased over the last decade. Secondly, although its drawbacks, I mostly agree that online advertisements are still the most suitable way to promote a product not only it is cheaper and giving chance to reach on global wide but also thanks to advancement in artificial intelligence the product is promoted only for interested audience which makes process more productive. In other words, products are shown the people who have similar interests in that area consequently it increase the profits. To conclude, although advertisements on the internet can be bypassed by many of people but I agree that with the developments in technology today most suitable commercials are being chosen for respective audience and advertising online is still the most useful way to promote production.
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in a day and age when advertising is
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to
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people
as the best method for promoting
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products
. This essay will
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agree
with the stated
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idea
and discuss the primary reasons behind it.

Firstly
, it is an undeniable fact that more and more
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people
have tendency to skip
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advertisements
on internet even while they are watching their favorite influencer who earns living from including commercials into their blog videos.
In other words
, watching
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advertisements
on internet seem as wasting time for a number of
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people
and whatever the concept of commercial they
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see
not interesting for them.
For example
, the study has
been carried
out by the researchers of Manchester university depicts that the user rate of
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adblockers
has been
dramatically
increased over the last decade.

Secondly
, although its drawbacks, I
mostly
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agree
that online
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advertisements
are
still
the most suitable way to promote a
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product
not
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only
it is cheaper and giving chance to reach on global wide
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but
also
thanks to advancement in artificial intelligence the
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product
is promoted
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only
for interested audience which
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makes
process more productive.
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,
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products
are shown
the
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people
who have similar interests in that area
consequently
it
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increase
the profits.

To conclude
, although
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advertisements
on the internet can
be bypassed
by
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many
of
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people
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but
I
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agree
that with the developments in technology
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today
most suitable commercials are
being chosen
for respective audience and advertising online is
still
the most useful way to promote production.
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IELTS essay Some people say that the best way to promote products is to advertise them on the internet. with this statement?

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