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Some people say that self employment is better than a job in a company

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ho beings
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wark
The day on argument along with by
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prospectives
in upcoming

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employment
is better places &
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Foud
is it
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provids
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peusdem
pic
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inciduals
. To
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deliblate
its
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people
can
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innot
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monly
they
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ward they much they want Consult
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any one
do not have tho example a
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wachen
who's
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deast
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to was
a Krupp
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Chidibutes
and the
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earen
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only
500
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month
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but
when he wasted to
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love
in their
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own
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ser
after become a
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succeffel
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passen


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further
moving towards the nation

Yoko in a
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company


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panatilution
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Recovice
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Sabity
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IELTS essay Some people say that self employment is better than a job in a company

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
90 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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