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Invension of computer in human history

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The biggest invention of human being is computer. By dint of it human have achieved almost everything. There isn't a sector where computer hasn't been used. It all started when a mathematician made abacus which was a calculating device. The concept of computer derived from the idea of this unique thing. Mainly three important parts exist in modern computer those are subsequently CPU, RAM and ROM. It works when an user give inpute where it does it's processing and based on the processing it gives output. If we talk about the devices need for running a computer, primarily input and output devices we need.
The biggest invention of human being is computer. By dint of it human have achieved almost everything. There isn't a sector where computer hasn't been
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idea
of this unique thing.
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parts exist in modern computer those are
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CPU, RAM and ROM. It works when
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where it does it's processing and based on the processing it gives output. If we talk about the devices need for running a computer,
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input and output devices we need.

IELTS essay Invension of computer in human history

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